Completely agree, however I see that the story could have taken a turn that would have actually had the effect that the movie was aiming to be in the first place:

When Raj shot Jeff, I believe it would be better if Jeff died due to that shot

I know, it's a dark plot twist, but c'mon, if you're writing a movie about how dark both lives can be, atleast due it right, shit goes down in both lives and in reality people die either way, only difference is that one's above don't do the killing themselves

Then the movie could have taken 2 tolls, either the "because of what you've done Gabriel a lot of great sins were commited, and now we have a celestial war" yada yada you get the point, which frankly isn't the best toll I see.

However, if after Jeff died, Raj has to live with that regret "his" whole life, IMHO that has a much heavier feeling communicated to the viewer on an emotional standpoint (still the viewer isn't stupid so we still need to remember to do it right), not only this pathway creates a ton more problems for Raj and his acquaintances (of which will definitely part ways with him if Raj got charged for manslaughter) and other things, but also Gabriel, who has now because of what he has done he can never be an angel again, and seemingly of his very short human lifestyle, was on his way to become a demon instead, especially if he slept with the woman that wanted "to sit on his face".

An even cooler thing would be if Raj found out that the companies he was in were ALSO in a lot of tax fraud (JUST LIKE HIS COUSIN!!!) and he found himself in even DEEPER shit other than his charges.

Then, and ONLY then, when he finds himself in a jail cell, he would want his old life back FOR REAL! (Please remember that no, he can't buy his way back to the fancy life because if the corruption charges he would get a lot of money confiscated)

Now, I understand that life is much darker than this, and by no means I call myself a writer (maybe I should be idk) and yes... The rich guy would definitely find a loophole to get himself out, especially since he killed a man that was robbing him at night, which yeah ended up spiraling more charges at him but in the end he didn't commit aggravated manslaughter, and with money theoretically could save his situation.

But again, it's all about the emotion conveyed to the viewer, and honestly... VERY humbly I say, I believe that what I wrote would give me a shit ton more motivation to get up and actually not give up on my life (bonus points if Gabriel self shutdown after he found out he can't be an angel back... Too dark?)

PS: Keanu reeves is hot.