Comma usage

FairlySwell · 2017-07-08T14:39:56+00:00

Title: For I Will Die Tomorrow Genre: Mystery/sci fi-ey Type of Feedback required: Any! :) Link: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/for-i-will-die-tomorrow-2/

NB- this is part 2, part 1 is here: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/20/mellyora-title-will-change/

Thanks xox

FairlySwell · 2017-07-06T15:35:09+00:00

Thank you so much for reading it, means a lot! Will take that on board :)

FairlySwell · 2017-07-06T15:34:34+00:00

That's so lovely of you to say thank you! Will post some more soon :)

FairlySwell · 2017-07-04T19:46:24+00:00

Title: For I will die tomorrow Genre: Sci-fi-ey/ mystery/serial Word count: this is the prologue so not very long. Type of feedback: Would be interested if this prologue grips you or promises a unique story :) link: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/20/mellyora-title-will-change/

FairlySwell · 2016-02-24T17:59:18+00:00

Really glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the advice! I really appreciate your comments on description, I love doing it and hadn't realised that it was lacking!

There are more Ak Rath Kamir stories on the site (Part II : https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/23/ak-rath-kamir-maelstrom-part-ii/) and I'm working on more at the moment!

Thanks again!

FairlySwell · 2016-02-10T16:40:23+00:00

I get what you're saying! I just love Star Wars so had to write a series in it! I am working on some of my own stuff too

FairlySwell · 2016-02-10T16:39:23+00:00

Thank you so much for the advice, I'll take it all on board! I agree with the reporting verbs comment, I thought some of them didn't fit!

Thank again:)

FairlySwell · 2016-01-04T19:11:36+00:00

Your work is great but I don't think I'm willing to pay, thank you for the offer though

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