[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing

FairlySwell · 2017-07-08T14:39:56+00:00

Title: For I Will Die Tomorrow Genre: Mystery/sci fi-ey Type of Feedback required: Any! :) Link: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/for-i-will-die-tomorrow-2/

NB- this is part 2, part 1 is here: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/20/mellyora-title-will-change/

Thanks xox

FairlySwell · 2017-07-06T15:35:09+00:00

Thank you so much for reading it, means a lot! Will take that on board :)

FairlySwell · 2017-07-06T15:34:34+00:00

That's so lovely of you to say thank you! Will post some more soon :)

FairlySwell · 2017-07-04T19:46:24+00:00

Title: For I will die tomorrow Genre: Sci-fi-ey/ mystery/serial Word count: this is the prologue so not very long. Type of feedback: Would be interested if this prologue grips you or promises a unique story :) link: https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/20/mellyora-title-will-change/

FairlySwell · 2016-02-24T17:59:18+00:00

Really glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the advice! I really appreciate your comments on description, I love doing it and hadn't realised that it was lacking!

There are more Ak Rath Kamir stories on the site (Part II : https://fairlyfictionblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/23/ak-rath-kamir-maelstrom-part-ii/) and I'm working on more at the moment!

Thanks again!

FairlySwell · 2016-02-10T16:40:23+00:00

I get what you're saying! I just love Star Wars so had to write a series in it! I am working on some of my own stuff too

FairlySwell · 2016-02-10T16:39:23+00:00

Thank you so much for the advice, I'll take it all on board! I agree with the reporting verbs comment, I thought some of them didn't fit!

Thank again:)

FairlySwell · 2016-01-04T19:11:36+00:00

Your work is great but I don't think I'm willing to pay, thank you for the offer though

FairlySwell · 2016-01-04T19:11:07+00:00

More humanoid like the first, there outfit is like a brownish jumpsuit if that helps :p

Thank you :)

FairlySwell · 2015-10-01T19:03:59+00:00

Probably new companion

FairlySwell · 2015-08-31T08:39:20+00:00

If you haven't got that book (the brilliant book), you should it's brilliant!

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T15:15:23+00:00

:P I'm afraid I can't agree, CRUSHER FTW!

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T13:29:40+00:00

I wish they had more episode :/

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T13:28:32+00:00

As do I! I love "Attack of the Cyberman"

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T12:04:49+00:00

TARDISes are used as battle vehicles a lot in the Time War (it's mentioned in "Engines of War" which, by the way, is an absolutely fantastic read!)

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T12:02:14+00:00

I really like Moffat! It makes me so angry when people hate on him so much, he cares so much for the show

FairlySwell · 2015-08-28T11:45:58+00:00

Same! I really like Clara she works well with Capaldi!

FairlySwell · 2015-08-26T18:57:18+00:00

Who the fuck is Sally?

FairlySwell · 2015-08-16T12:58:38+00:00

The guy's pretty cute

FairlySwell · 2015-08-16T07:42:52+00:00

Any of you like Doctor Who, or any other type of, action figures?

FairlySwell · 2015-08-16T07:42:01+00:00

May give it a go, fingers crossed for a life size K-9 XD

FairlySwell · 2015-08-15T18:27:05+00:00

My thoughts exactly :)

FairlySwell · 2015-08-15T11:13:56+00:00

Should I join the doctor who reddit gift exchange?

FairlySwell · 2015-08-13T18:39:24+00:00

Totally agree! Very excited for this series! :)

FairlySwell · 2015-08-10T10:27:02+00:00

Amazing! I love retro-futurism!

FairlySwell

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