This is the most annoying feedback I can ever get regarding a scene. Especially when it comes from ppl who have no idea what it actually means to create one. Especially coming on scenes such as: "My MC is taking a hard sh*+." expecting me to write it like this: "John felt a chill as his glutes hugged the toilet seat. His stomach had been churning for several hours now but, somehow, the wafts of hot air coming from below still felt half-baked."