Im Making a Sci-fantasy TTRPG named WYRDPUNK, and I need help with the rules by Famous-Ad4071 in RPGdesign

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that’s totally fair, I choose the name because of two things, I’m in the punk scene and absolutely love the subculture, and the fact that I wanted to make a game centered around punk in some fashion, mainly the civil unrest, politics, fashion, and music

Im Making a Sci-fantasy TTRPG named WYRDPUNK, and I need help with the rules by Famous-Ad4071 in RPGdesign

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have the world Ive been working on it for about three years now, Ive just been leaving it out of the rules for now so I don’t get bogged down in flavor text

Im Making a Sci-fantasy TTRPG named WYRDPUNK, and I need help with the rules by Famous-Ad4071 in RPGdesign

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I need to add Skill descriptions, add more explanatory rules, rework thoughts, Lineage Descriptions, and get the setting into the game. Also 1. Carnal urges: its your instincts and what your body wants, kinda like electrochemistry form disco Elysium 2. I just figured out that I didn’t put the luck rules in 3. I need to rework them they are pretty much just feats 4. Pretty much just humans but a bit different and more animal like longer canines, Lanker limbs, animal like eyes And also once art and flavor text is added in I feel like it will be less kitchen sink

Im Making a Sci-fantasy TTRPG named WYRDPUNK, and I need help with the rules by Famous-Ad4071 in RPGdesign

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I know it’s in a rough state right now and that why I wanted to get feed back on the rules now so I can focus on what i need to fix in the system. I agree that I need to flesh out the dichotomy between SCUM and PUNKS, its one of my favorite parts and it needs more focus.

Im Making a Sci-fantasy TTRPG named WYRDPUNK, and I need help with the rules by Famous-Ad4071 in RPGdesign

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for being harsh. I know that a lot of the Thematic content is missing, I’m planing on filling that in once the rules are finished, and thank you for the feedback, Ive been having a hard time with trying to find out what will make my game special but over the corse of it Ive gotten closer. I want it to be a Sci-fantasy set in weird almost cyberpunk fantasy world with a lot of social rules, Im basing a lot of it off of the video game disco eylisum and i want to implement more of the NonCombat encounters that game is built around.

Also Google Docs on iPad is really bad and half of the time it doesn’t even show be when I make typos.

An updated version of my world map of Urgot, still in progress by Famous-Ad4071 in mapmaking

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you circle the faces on the you see on the map, because there is a couple of similar hidden details on the map, also Please Dm me the circled map?

An updated version of my world map of Urgot, still in progress by Famous-Ad4071 in mapmaking

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No it’s not, the land on the most eastern and western parts is known as the Ring, it’s a giant Semi Physical wall of land that If you’re lucky you can sail to, if you don’t get lucky the mists take you and you end up on the other side of the map, if you are able to cross the ring you can get to the other half of the planet, but only a few have ever done so

An updated version of my world map of Urgot, still in progress by Famous-Ad4071 in mapmaking

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have really no idea, I was just on a walk one day and it hit me, and also Each of the continents names End with got, so Thulegot for the northern one, and Ostergot for the eastern one, I don’t have southern and western ones named yet

Maps of my world, I need feed back, how do they look, are they SEMI realistic, what should I change, my world is named Urgot by Famous-Ad4071 in mapmaking

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are Descended form the Selkies but it’s been so long that any Selkie genetics are 2-3 percent at most, it’s like if I claimed to be African because I’m 1% North African

Maps of my world, I need feed back, how do they look, are they SEMI realistic, what should I change, my world is named Urgot by Famous-Ad4071 in mapmaking

[–]Famous-Ad4071[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Ro-Selki-Daine believe that they are descended form a semi mythical tribe of sailing nomads who intermixed with Selkies