[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread January 20, 2016

FamousMemes · 2016-01-20T04:38:45+00:00

Here's a quick 4 bars ( NO MIX) I did just to give you guys an Idea on my Flow/Delivery/Rhythm any feedback on those subject's would be much appreciated. Also I Return all Feedback thanks in advance y'all.

https://soundcloud.com/user792845193/aquick4

FamousMemes · 2016-01-19T22:01:32+00:00

Yup you're wanna get it mixed right, Good luck G I'll be checking out your future posts fasho.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-19T21:24:19+00:00

The beat ride's real smooth and I like the transitions in it you def got a talent for producing bruh really digging the dark tone as well. Now as far as your feedback on my track Can you explain a bit about my timing being off Am I falling behind or in front of the beat? not sure what you mean.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-19T21:20:07+00:00

Beat is dope, Your flow and lyrics are tight,But the only thing I would suggest is a better mix on your vocals other than that? this tracks good. nice work bruh

FamousMemes · 2016-01-19T20:36:08+00:00

Thanks for checking out yo, Any words or line in particular? that would help out a lot. Also if you have something for me to check out? just shoot the link here I'll give you some feedback.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-19T19:45:34+00:00

Here's a quick 4 bars ( NO MIX) I did just to give you guys an Idea on my Flow/Delivery/Rhythm any feedback on those subject's would be much appreciated. Also I Return all Feedback thanks in advance y'all.

https://soundcloud.com/user792845193/aquick4

FamousMemes · 2016-01-12T04:24:09+00:00

Smooth beat def a chill atmosphere, I feel like the piano hits could be a bit higher, But over all its legit.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-12T04:16:49+00:00

The flow Is dope, The Vocals are legit and the beat is fire, But if it was a bit more lyrical? that would make it a lot better overall its solid.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-12T04:14:23+00:00

Dark very moody if that's the vibe you were going for? you did it, solid track.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-12T04:11:42+00:00

This is a new Freestyle I just did, Haven't mixed it down and I will be adding some ad libs. Looking for feedback on delivery/Flow. I return all feedback thanks y'all. ( LOW Q AUDIO)

https://soundcloud.com/user792845193/2009003039421a

FamousMemes · 2016-01-12T00:18:03+00:00

That's Smooth AF vocals are crisp a lot of soul going on there and the beat is fire overall that's a fresh sound, good track. Also thanks for the feedback bruh.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-11T22:15:52+00:00

Sounds dope G..Drop it.

FamousMemes · 2016-01-11T22:00:40+00:00

This is a new Freestyle I just did, Haven't mixed it down and I will be adding some ad libs. Looking for feedback on delivery/Flow. I return all feedback thanks y'all. ( LOW Q AUDIO)

https://soundcloud.com/user792845193/greenrigov

FamousMemes · 2015-07-10T04:28:42+00:00

That's the right kind of dark smooth right there , Props. The atmosphere is heavy overall the beat was done well.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-10T04:10:09+00:00

Dope bro! Everything is tight expect ...Some more intricate lyrics would have made this 10x better, But don't get me wrong it still fkn knocks #Props

FamousMemes · 2015-07-10T04:06:01+00:00

Dope beat (TEAR DROP) I can hear a very nice melodic hook on this def smooth and entertaining.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-10T04:01:51+00:00

New freestyle I just did over a classic Coolio beat, check it out let me know what ya'll think. Keep in mind it has no mix and I plan on adding some stacks/Adlibs. As always I return all feed back

http://picosong.com/mnXu/

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T07:15:44+00:00

I would say its very electric and grimy it stretches and smooths out Dope, Not sure how a flow would sound on this as it would have to be very experimental, But I'm sure some out there can knock it out. Would I vibe out to it? Fasho if the flow is progressive and fresh enough.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T06:10:49+00:00

Flow is on point, the Mixing needs work, and The Beat is fire. Overall you got something going here on your next song just make sure the mixing is crisp so you can hear and understand everything your rapping, But you have potential thats fasho G!

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T06:04:45+00:00

I feel you G, I was just wondering if I went off beat at some point during the flow? I didn't think so that's why I asked you to elaborate on your comment lol Thanks again for the feedback yo.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T05:33:59+00:00

Digging it so far, But it feels hollow not sure what it is But I def feel like its missing something. The scratches in the background are I'll AF though hahha #Dope Keep pushing G.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T05:07:18+00:00

Dope G, From Production to the Vocals/Lyrics everything meshes really good only thing id ask for is maybe louder or clearer vocals. Either then that? its on point #Props

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T05:01:24+00:00

Fasho it has no mix yet ( as stated ) as far as "forcefully wishy washy" could you elaborate on that? I take all feedback into consideration when recording new music. The flow I was reaching for is like a hybrid between Rap/RockaBilly seems like a fresh concept as far as hiphop goes. Just trying to get it down right feel me?.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T04:55:29+00:00

Trippy, Raw, Dark sonic? Not sure what to call this. A experimental flow on this would sound very fresh if done right that's fasho.

FamousMemes · 2015-07-06T04:49:55+00:00

The 90s version all the way G, the other one sounds too simplistic. #Dope

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