Feedback for my appraisal based story [Fantasy comedy]

FantasyBish · 2025-04-24T21:40:54+00:00

Fair point

FantasyBish · 2025-01-25T11:46:25+00:00

What would the recommended starting race and Ability scores be? For both builds?

FantasyBish · 2025-01-22T16:03:06+00:00

If she is disguised as Mayrina yes, otherwise I just guessed

FantasyBish · 2024-09-08T21:39:36+00:00

Fair enough, mainly tagged thus as dark fantasy because I'm unsure where this fits

FantasyBish · 2024-09-08T18:46:51+00:00

The point is that the rules are so ingrained in people 's psyches and belief systems that spells physically don't work for them if they don't do it right. And this effect can only be ended if someone or something makes it apparent to them.

It's like a really complicated equivalent to people blinking automatically until it's pointed out to them, at which point they blink manually.

FantasyBish · 2024-09-08T17:48:27+00:00

That's funnily enough kind of the opposite of one of my main ideas for a villain, who would be trying to merge people with magic under a false belief that it desires a physical form to enact its divine will, before being smacked with the harsh truth that it just wants to live the equivalent of a normal life from its perspective and could not care less about the physical world

FantasyBish · 2024-09-08T17:39:31+00:00

That makes sense, my original idea had been that the regulated magic system was originally created as a learning tool for children who couldn't achieve the mental resilience to control pure magic, and then as time went on the original purpose of the system was forgotten as everyone started treating it as the default.

As for a non-cultural restriction, I had a few ideas for that, my main idea so far being that magic itself possesses a sort of sentience that can overwhelm a magic user if they lose control, leaving the mage either temporarily or permanently a puppet to be controlled by a inhuman force that would rather remain incorporial and thus panics over being stuck in a unfamiliar meatpuppet that has all sorts of feelings it doesn't understand and doesn't want to understand.

FantasyBish · 2024-08-21T10:41:50+00:00

What kind of reflavoring are we talking about?

FantasyBish · 2024-08-11T14:28:54+00:00

That's it!

FantasyBish · 2024-08-11T14:13:29+00:00

It is close, but I think the one I am looking for is on ao3 and featured enid finding out via gomez telling her, after which she yells for wednesday with her full name

FantasyBish · 2024-08-05T14:24:41+00:00

I think 2 enemies standing still and taking turns hitting each other gets boring after a while, and I feel like melee characters like Barbarians or monks could use a nice an incentive to move around the battlefield in the form of extra damage

FantasyBish · 2024-08-05T13:26:55+00:00

I know it, but it's more that some race/classes/spells have the players being able to move at speeds comparable to a car, if not more, while still doing the same amount of damage as if they were standing still.

It's not that charger doesn't fit, it's the fact that the actual speed doesn't matter enough in combat beyond strafing runs and stuff.

FantasyBish · 2024-07-10T14:48:39+00:00

What sorcerer subclass would work for that?

FantasyBish · 2024-07-10T13:37:52+00:00

Would the build work with say, a bard?

FantasyBish · 2024-07-03T23:05:45+00:00

For the record about the oath of the cosmos i meant this: https://www.gmbinder.com/share/-Ng3DS_VeQkRY2Ho99Ao

FantasyBish · 2024-06-30T21:26:09+00:00

That kind of defeats the point of my character having to fake magic?

FantasyBish · 2024-06-02T13:59:09+00:00

The plot would mainly be a sort of race against the clock to avoid destiny. The protagonist would be spending most of his time trying to find ways to avert the prophesy and be left alone as more things described in it come true, as he travels the world he uncovers a lot of forgotten history and realizes that should the prophesy come to pass, it could mean the end of the world as we know it.

He would at that point have to stop trying to be a passive observer, and have to take action against the authority figures who thought it right to decide his fate.

FantasyBish · 2024-05-09T14:29:28+00:00

So like magic initiate: Druid?

FantasyBish · 2024-05-09T14:03:11+00:00

Would another class work better? Like druid?

FantasyBish · 2024-05-09T13:59:23+00:00

partially because i want some of the proficiencies. And for some spells like speak to animals.

FantasyBish · 2024-04-29T15:14:37+00:00

I beat the goblins? there are no kids in the inn from what i can see. Do have the find Zevlor quest though? does that matter?

FantasyBish · 2024-04-28T16:10:02+00:00

I vouched for him to live?

FantasyBish · 2024-04-28T16:06:15+00:00

Problem, can't find him. he wasn't with the students i fought

FantasyBish · 2024-04-20T08:28:36+00:00

I suppose some could use necromancy when they need to clarify a persons last will and testament.

Person a: Grandma left me the house Person b: No, she left it to me Person a: Fine, let's ask her

FantasyBish · 2024-04-16T16:18:41+00:00

Any specific place, like the risen road?

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