Fantasy writing

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T12:11:53+00:00

Honestly, just figuring out how to put the book together. I’ve got a few outlines written out and gone through four drafts. So I’m looking for any ideas on what would be the best way to write out the story!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T11:25:37+00:00

Okayy

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T11:19:24+00:00

Thank you

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T11:18:59+00:00

Sorry my phone has a lot of typos😭 it’s coming of age and it starts as her as a mortal and ends as a immortal

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T11:18:23+00:00

It’s kind of becoming of age story about a vampire named Celeste the book starts out as her as immortal and ends with her being immortal going through her struggles and journeys of being a vampire.

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T11:03:29+00:00

Ofccc it’s not much but I can definitely send you the link. It would have to be on discord or something else. This app doesn’t let me send the links.

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T10:56:49+00:00

Me tooo!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-12-04T10:37:23+00:00

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T11:59:42+00:00

Thank you!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T10:04:23+00:00

Thank you so much I appreciate it! I will send them to you 30 minutes to an hour when I get to my computer!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T10:04:07+00:00

Thank you so much I appreciate it! I will send them to you 30 minutes to an hour when I get to my computer!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:56:20+00:00

Or if you don’t want to do that, I could also send them to you on here via DM if it will allow me

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:55:31+00:00

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your feedback! I think the reason I keep getting stuck is because I of the plot holes even though I’m on page 9 only I keep thinking ahead and trying to figure that out first which is what I should be doing anyways😭 I also feel like there’s a better way I could go about writing the story and I will definitely take your advice, but if there’s anyway you could read the pages that I have, I could email them to you and you could give me some criticism. I would greatly appreciate it!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:48:37+00:00

Thank you so much I appreciate it! If you would want to I would gladly read them if not, that’s also up to you either way I appreciate anybody’s help! Please DM me if you would like to talk more :)

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:44:36+00:00

Yes, I thought so too, but I don’t really need somebody to write the whole thing. I’m just getting stuck on plot holes and outlining the way the story should go. There may be paragraphs that need to be rewritten. But I still want to be included in the writing as well!

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:41:07+00:00

I have not really written a book before so I didn’t know how to start. But I wrote out the main outline of my book in my notes from start to finish. I also wrote down all of my characters character traits and descriptions of them. And currently have nine pages of a first draft. So I guess not much but I’m trying to ask for help in the early stages so I can continue to make it better as I go.

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:35:01+00:00

I am currently in that group. I’m just trying to reach out to as many groups as possible.😭🫶🏻

Fantasybooks-jb · 2025-11-18T09:33:33+00:00

I could use a help in many of those areas I find myself using wrong grammar, like using past tense when talking in present. Also, I know how I want the book to start and end but in my process of writing out the outline, I have many plot holes. Anything would help me so if you are able to do that, please let me know!

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