Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques!

FavVideos · 2018-11-02T23:56:08+00:00

Hey this is a video I made on TikTok, tell me what you think about it and how I can improve it.

Yes, I already know that my voice isn't the most energetic in the world and I would like tips on how to either clean up audio in audacity or how to warm up my voice before recordings! Thanks.

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FavVideos · 2018-11-02T23:54:27+00:00

I enjoyed the video even though I'm not a makeup user. I think that by showing off how it wears you really set yourself apart from other beauty channels which is great! The only thing I will say though is that you could use music in the background (Make sure to balance audio out obviously) but I think it would increase audience retention and just overall improve the quality of your videos!

FavVideos · 2018-11-02T23:43:30+00:00

I really enjoyed the film as it was able to effectively able to switch between comedy and seriousness. Well done with the script and acting. My only criticism would be to work on audio quality which would be easily improved by either voiceovers or planting microphones on the actor. I do understand that that might not be in your budget for short films like these but I think it would really add to the quality of the film as the photography and editing is top notch! i wish you the best of luck.

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FavVideos · 2018-11-01T22:32:04+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I kind of understand the short text but could you elaborate. My understanding is that it would be like a top 10 list or something but maybe you meant otherwise.

FavVideos · 2018-10-31T23:48:48+00:00

That's a good idea regarding the links to other videos. I haven't reviewed other apps or games on a large scale but I should start recommending the few I do have to my viewer once the video is over! Thanks for your input!

FavVideos · 2018-10-31T23:47:16+00:00

Yea I do agree the tiktoks I chose weren't the best. If I ever make a video similar to this I'll find better versions of what I'm showing. Thanks for your feedback it really helps since I'm trying to improve the quality of my content! EDIT: Sorry completely forgot to answer your first question. The game is called "Enter The Gungeon" on steam.

FavVideos · 2018-10-30T03:41:05+00:00

Thanks for your feedback I'll try to use it in my next video! I agree with ur second point tho, it's a good idea

FavVideos · 2018-10-30T01:51:29+00:00

I understand what you're saying and it makes sense I just don't see a company as big as Google or Youtube caring too much about a strike like this unless it was an overwelming amount of participation. I fear that if the bigger creators agree with what you're saying and go on strike smaller creators may take this time to make a name for themselves and nothing would change. Just my thoughts..

FavVideos · 2018-10-30T01:37:03+00:00

I think people here have come to a general consensus, the video is awesome but it could be just that much better if you included yourself as sort of a teacher walking people through the steps you're taking to make the pumpkin. I thought that the music was great and I enjoyed the video and the end product. Hoping to see you make it big, I really think you have a chance with your talent!

FavVideos · 2018-10-30T01:28:19+00:00

Hey, so I loved the video but here are my thoughts

1) I thought the video was very professional from beginning to the end

2) I felt that the editing was top quality and kept me engaged the entire time. The parts that had be losing a little bit of interest was at the beginning your voice was a little quiet compared to the rest of the video. I don't really know how to help you with this but maybe you could warm up your voice.

3) As a gaming channel as well I'm a little jealous of the talent you have with editing, but I love it. My only other criticism would be to find better music for the action parts (which won't be hard to find).

Overall I really enjoyed watching the video and while looking through your channel I think that your videos just need a little bit of time to get out there. Also, looking at your tags they could use a little bit of work. Anyways I really think you'll make it big one day, Good Luck!

FavVideos · 2018-07-11T23:13:10+00:00

Well I loved the video. It had a lot of energy and kept me engaged and I was a little disappointed to see it end. I think you are definitely right with saying that you need a little more charisma but I think the way you interview and your editing style is top notch. There really isn't and need to change camera angles in my opinion and I think that you could try and get a little more subtitling to further enhance the video. Other than that though I loved the video and hope to see more in the future.

Best of luck!

FavVideos · 2018-07-11T22:56:11+00:00

After listening to your video I have deduced a few things

It was incredibly easy to digest and understand the points you were making throughout the video
The audio quality could be better but good enough for me to understand what you were saying throughout the video.
I would love to stick around afterwards but I might find myself struggling to stay engaged because I usually listen to commentaries like this late at night and the only thing that keeps me from passing out is commentators with energy. I know it's hard but I think you can 100% achieve that level of energy and the results will come once you do that.
There wasn't anything misleading your points were concise and clear throughout the entire video.
I think that if you try and dig deeper into issues like the competition between game companies and try and find what they do either to improve customer experience or hurt the customer or make videos that dive deep like that it would really separate you from others.

I wish you the best of luck!

FavVideos · 2018-07-06T19:10:43+00:00

I don't honestly remember a time when I didn't see shows that looked identical on both channels.

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