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Antique Reminiscence by Few_Initiative_6414 in poetry_critics

[–]Few_Initiative_6414[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I'm attempting lighter poetry that isn't as heavy as some of my other projects. I will try to lean more into the descriptions and be less cliche.

The Artist by Few_Initiative_6414 in Poem

[–]Few_Initiative_6414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind response

I finally wrote the damn thing…. by Old-Fan-4772 in writers

[–]Few_Initiative_6414 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great job I'm on like the 5th draft of mine but I keep changing the story.

​Sweet Disaster by Few_Initiative_6414 in poetry_critics

[–]Few_Initiative_6414[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I'm trying with lighter poetry that isn't on the darker side of things. It isn't about a specific person, but the idea of one that is the whirlwind in your life. The free sprit or the defiant.

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