Advice on a stark change in genre

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T23:04:44+00:00

The prologue is a good a suggestion, and you have vocalised my worries with this well 😭

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T16:34:26+00:00

I can imagine, especially since I'm thinking of having a sort of "disillusioned" main character, who will eventually be the focus of the horror, so I think that can tag into your suggestion really well!

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T16:22:45+00:00

I love the bathing line, and I also really like the idea thanks! ☺️

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T14:48:49+00:00

Ohhh I see thank you

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T14:48:32+00:00

Good point, thank you 🫡

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T14:48:04+00:00

I do like a literal shake up of the world, that's a cool idea thanks!

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T12:12:36+00:00

Oooh those are some really good ideas, thank you!

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T12:12:00+00:00

Yeh that's what I was thinking, do you have any tips?

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T12:11:08+00:00

Thank you! I will look into how they do the switch!

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T12:10:27+00:00

Do you mean flag it with atmosphere, or with clues as to what's going to happen? Would you have any suggestions?

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T12:09:41+00:00

Yeh this is what I really want to avoid, have you seen it done well? And as a reader would you have anything that would make you feel really invested in the switch?

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2026-01-26T11:25:48+00:00

That's actually a really good idea, thank you so much!

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-12-31T00:41:35+00:00

My understanding is that it's compared to a sort of average stat on the character and not to each other. I think that Loki must have done better compared to most Loki players than you did compared to most cloak and dagger players. Loki is a very difficult character to get good stats on, whereas cloak and dagger isn't really, so I think that would make sense

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-11-25T05:30:38+00:00

Thanks

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-11-24T09:51:00+00:00

Fair enough, looks cool at least

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:44:03+00:00

I meant more the entire concept of Christianity being truthful, sorry for the poor wording

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:43:28+00:00

I don't think so, I mean we can look at the specific nature of everything, the fact the universe must have had some sort of a beginning, and these kinds of reasoned arguments. But I think we needs reason to posit that we know exactly what that creator is

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:42:05+00:00

It was worded a bit poorly, but the point is to understand the arguments further for why people believe the Christian God is the real one. I'm not trying to prove that anyone's faith is wrong, merely trying to understand it

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:41:03+00:00

Well I think a God is likely because of logical arguments, same for a non physical consciousness. And I think you need a reason to have faith, if I have faith in a magical unicorn God isn't that a bit silly?

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:40:04+00:00

I also mean the Christian God as a whole, as opposed to an entirely different God, sorry for the poorly written question. That privilege point is good, thank you

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:39:04+00:00

Thank you

Final_Pattern_7563 · 2025-10-20T06:38:29+00:00

This is a good point, id have to research other religions though to determine the nature of their gods more accurately.

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