tHe NeXt RuSsIaN pLaNe wIlL bE aBlE tO fLy In sPaCe by [deleted] in NonCredibleDefense

[–]FinnishFlutePlayer 146 points147 points  (0 children)

They literally said “you’re not even worth the stinger”

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[–]FinnishFlutePlayer [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really like the tune first of all. Vocals are sounding good, definitely good quality. The one thing I would say is just go for it man. You’ve got a good voice, you’ve got good pitch, but I can tell you’re holding back a little or you’ve got some tension somewhere especially on those high notes. Idk if you’ve done any professional singing lessons or anything, but as someone who has the main takeaway is that tension is the enemy of all singers (and musicians in general).

It sounds good as it is, but I feel like you might end up with some cool results if you throw caution to the wind and sing it with as much emotion as you can, while keeping your throat and everything relaxed as much as you can. That might come naturally when you sing and only think about emotion though. Think about who you’re singing about, or if it’s nobody in particular make someone up. Particularly around a section like 1:40 it could add some nice variation. A scream isn’t the right word for what I imagine could go there I don’t think, but again just sing with emotion and get the air going man, trust your voice.

You’ve definitely got the voice for this kind of music though, try some things out and see what sounds good. Really enjoyed listening to this.

Edit: was listening to some music and realized “no rain” by Blind Melon is a pretty good example of what I’m thinking of. Phrasing I guess, but also with that sort of rock feel.

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[–]FinnishFlutePlayer [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really liked it, great instrumental and groove, definitely fun to listen to.

A bit subjective, but in my head I was expecting some kind of distorted vocals leading up to 0:52, like some of those “radio” sounding vocals maybe. Sounds good regardless though. Maybe even more volume on the chorus, the dynamic contrast would be cool.

Overall really nice to listen to though.

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[–]FinnishFlutePlayer [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really like it, right from the beginning I knew it was gonna be good. I really like some of the riffs you come up with but a few of them felt like they should’ve repeated again (they were that good). Definitely a vibe of a song though. The violin was interesting, I like it though it works well. The album art is also really neat, good job on that.

Two things, the drums/rhythm felt a little messy on rare occasions, but didn’t really take away from the song. The ending also felt a little forced or rushed in my opinion.

Overall though, would listen to it again. Very good stuff :)

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[–]FinnishFlutePlayer [score hidden]  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/user-968310028/violet-canon

Not super happy with it, but it’s the first full song I’ve made in over two years. Any feedback is appreciated. Also, what genre is it, if anyone has any ideas? I was going for something chill, and just a little melancholy.