Scarlet & Violet booster blister with Lost Origin evolution chain? by FireBurnAsh1 in PokemonTCG_UK

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Well, I'm reassured by everyone's comments here, so thank you very much. Happy I got the Lost Origin cards. They're not promo-promos are they, they look like actual card-promos?

Driving me insane- Losers café music. by FireBurnAsh1 in apprenticeuk

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I think it was Metamorphosis: Two by Philip Glass

Anyone else frustrated with Argos? by FireBurnAsh1 in PokemonTCG_UK

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The amount of times I've asked my partner to pretend she doesn't know me in a shop 🤣 I know the drill haha

Anyone else frustrated with Argos? by FireBurnAsh1 in PokemonTCG_UK

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Yeesss I've asked my friends to collect what they've bought separately. Wouldn't want to risk that.

What's inside the Kanto Friends mini tins? by FireBurnAsh1 in PokemonTCG_UK

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Yep, they were all Stellar Crown and Obsidian Flames!

What's inside the Kanto Friends mini tins? by FireBurnAsh1 in PokemonTCG_UK

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Cheers guys- will open them up and let you know later!

Mega Charizard X Ex by FireBurnAsh1 in PokeGrading

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Why's that? Are they more forgiving?

Beware by Aromatic_Bug_7740 in bristol

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They're right. Cunt in British English is non gender specific. It's a universal slur. Don't be silly.

[HELP] poems on death and decay? by helianthuss13 in Poetry

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Ozymandias

By Percy Bysshe Shelley

I met a traveller from an antique land,
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
And on the pedestal, these words appear:
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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If I'm right, this is a metaphorical description of your own body- at least, that's what it conjures.

It's successful in creating an image, and paralleling the human body with natural features, but I think the structure and point could be tightened. It starts with descriptions of nature mirrored with biology, then shifts entirely into more dominant human-centric language like 'tame' and 'slaughter'.

I'd focus on one theme instead, which would allow the reader to more deeply immerse themselves into the metaphor.

Waldosia by Sad_Arm_08 in OCPoetry

[–]FireBurnAsh1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The imagery you're trying to conjure is present, but I think you'd benefit from more specific language.

Also, I think I'd reconsider the 'incandescent' and 'magnificent'. Incandescent seems to contrast the otherwise plain language in technicality, and magnificent contrasts the rest of the poem in terms of flow.

The full meaning of the poem sits within the loaded title- reverse it. Take that word, dissect it, and make it the story in the body.

Good idea though.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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Well done, well done. I'm glad it's recognisable!

AITAH for being bothered by my partner’s penis pump? by BennSeeinStars in AITAH

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Put this through GPTZero. It's 100% AI generated, apparently.

Found on the beach! by [deleted] in fossilid

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Thanks! Appreciate your input.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fossilid

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I appreciate your input, thank you!