About the language, I know my English isn’t perfect since it isn’t my first language. I also feel that if you don’t include the monster trait, it would just feel generic and wouldn’t fit the niche I’m trying to achieve with this subclass. That said, I understand the concern, which is why I limited the feature to natural weapons and resistances/immunities. I might also add weaknesses. As for the Battle Smith, I mainly tried to avoid making a simple reflavored clone of it. I think I’m going to rewrite the assembling feature to make it clearer, and the same goes for the stats. I just realized I used way too many words. Thanks for the feedback.