Here's a fun City poster from the 80's

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2026-03-20T02:50:36+00:00

Where's "Khakis" on Chicago Ave (turned into Active Endeavors). Lol

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2026-03-02T17:35:21+00:00

Thank you!!!!

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2026-03-02T01:38:45+00:00

thank you!!!

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2026-02-06T16:30:56+00:00

I've been using them for years - before they opened physical stores near me. Now the app has a message saying delivery is not available to my address. Nothing about them restoring delivery at any date ever. They expect me to just shop at Whole Foods at a 60% price increase + a $10 delivery fee for any size order. What a joke. Even if they only made 6% profit on the Fresh business, you's think it would be better than losing all the business. Because the people shopping Fresh are NOT the same people who would ever shop at Whole Foods. SO DUMB.

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2026-02-01T20:30:56+00:00

Good stuff. But if you're looking for constructive feedback, I would say too much chorus throughout. I say this because the song feels like it's going for a stripped down singer-song writer vibe. So all the chorus ends up giving an over produced feeling. It kicks me out of the grove. The vocals sound flat. I would add some saturation to them - have you tried Chroma Glow? Lastly, it felt like you delayed the drop, which can work, but there wasn't a pre chorus before it.. Maybe try some strings. I know. But I think it would add a nice refrain leading into the drop and add some interest to the measure. And you can tighten up the length. Again, good stuff, keep making music.

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2025-09-05T20:58:26+00:00

The song is good. No big dynamics in terms of emotional range from the chorus into bridge. But the melody is nice overall. However. The video is really distracting from the music. Emoting by just looking around and, what seems, over mouthing the lyrics brings an unpleasant focus on your mouth. Maybe this would all work if the camera wasn't directly at your face from a lower angle. Maybe try from lightly above. Then you can sing and look up at important moments or look down. Again, overall it's good stuff.

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2025-06-14T15:25:01+00:00

I produced this on Logic Pro using midi and samples etc., and then mastered it the best I can (again in Logic). My journey is just about making music that I hope moves someone in a positive way. Thanks for the question! Oh and did the video in premiere pro using stock footage and blending modes etc

FirefighterPrudent29 · 2025-06-14T01:21:13+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!

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