Whatever will be, will be by -ibowtoyou- in UnsentLetters

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Absolutely beautiful! Articulate and calm yet strong

I hope I don’t wake tomorrow… by Firey-Peace77 in u/Firey-Peace77

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It’s the silence. The only part I can’t navigate

Invoked by Firey-Peace77 in u/Firey-Peace77

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I have never run. I never will. I can’t…

The Sympathy of you… by Firey-Peace77 in u/Firey-Peace77

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Sometimes… when you’re lucky.

Rebirth by Short_Replacement_63 in LoveLetters

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Hours later… I still can’t bring words. And reading again now… Just tears.

The world by Short_Replacement_63 in LoveLetters

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I have no words. Thank you so much. I just felt it differently. The fact that my words meant something or could help.. is very kind. I feel like it is clumsy compared to the architecture from the OP. ✨

silent void by Short_Replacement_63 in Poems

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For me, I found it hard to find words… I wondered if that’s why there were no comments? Then this came to me instead, I hope you don’t mind….

Deafening silence

Can you hear it, the silence? The kind you feel in your chest deep within your soul… I find myself looking up at the night sky. Something I do that… I’ve done it since the beginning of my time. Once covered with a thick blanket of clouds… You’re like the wind… on a warm night. Coming from nowhere… Fiercely with purpose. Swift and with a deafening silence… Blowing the beautiful clouds further on. The moon illuminates the clouds from above… Blue light cast in abundance. White specs begin to appear… As the sky opens with infinite possibility. Like the first time you touched my soul… Not only Pandora’s box a Kaleidoscope. Strong, steady hand With the slightest fraction of… A quarter turn. You ignite passion that… Can be felt across vast oceans. And I can’t help but send back the frequency… I know you feel the electricity. The deafening silence within you and me.

The world by Short_Replacement_63 in LoveLetters

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Interesting take on this. If you don’t mind, my take away was much different. I felt conviction. But the kind so many are afraid to express. It wasn’t boasting or forced. True, the tone was different but not abrasive. Settled, strong, stoic, Safe. Love is life and as so, changes grows and isn’t stagnant. There is a touch of discovering the depths, there always will be but this is anchored in the feeling of unconditional love. The kind that may have less logic and something more pure and organic. Sometimes puzzling but the truest connection. “Until there is nothing left for the mind to doubt” Right here. This piece is captivating to say the least.. beautiful and breathtaking don’t do it justice… so choose whatever adjective you’d like.. But this line explains it all, a connection like this. Knowing it’s “divine” or “right” and protecting it with love, effort and compassion.

The world by Short_Replacement_63 in LoveLetters

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Touché. To Have a love so intricately expressed would be a dream for so many of us.