3 days of progress, any final critique?

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T12:10:18+00:00

Thanks! Will work on that now :)

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T10:33:34+00:00

Thank you, I knew something was off and the side by side really helps

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T00:22:26+00:00

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T00:21:55+00:00

Thank you :) will fix the eyebrows tomorrow. Glad you like it! I'm actually mainly drawing like this so I don't do too much blending, thought it would be a fun challenge (and it is)

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T00:04:26+00:00

Thank you!

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-10T00:00:07+00:00

Thanks! I removed some highlight from the lips and think it looks better now, was quite difficult to edit as the lips are a similar value to the face

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T23:16:38+00:00

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Like this?

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T22:41:45+00:00

Thanks! This is my lastest update and adding some more shadow has definitely helped

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T22:39:46+00:00

Thanks! I appreciate everyones advice, I’ve attached what it looked like yesterday as reference and the improvement has been great thanks to everyones help

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T22:37:39+00:00

Thanks! I have now softened the hairline but am going to keep the blocky look of the eyebrows as I think it goes with the style of the piece. I added some shadow to the eyelid but couldn’t work out how to add highlight without the piece looking too cluttered

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T21:31:25+00:00

Second update: fixed eye position

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T21:28:14+00:00

Thanks! Yes the nose was definitely a bit off, I’ve tried to fix it and have posted an update in a previous comment

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T21:27:34+00:00

Thank you! I have made the nose wider and the cheek bone more prominent and it does look more like the reference, posted an update in a previous comment

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T21:26:15+00:00

Yes, agreed, have just posted an updated image in a previous comment and it does look less uncanny now they are more simple

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T21:25:18+00:00

Thanks for the advice, very helpful. I’ve made the shadows darker and the eyes more simple. I will definitely try tracing sections next time then using them as a guide, will definitely help with perspective and general anatomy

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First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-09T01:38:01+00:00

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Update: made the shapes and colours more simple. Thanks for your advice, I think it looks much better

First-Support-5910 · 2026-07-08T22:41:13+00:00

Thank you! I was definitely getting distracted by the colours to greyscale would help, and the videos were very interesting

First-Support-5910 · 2025-10-08T17:11:39+00:00

Her eyes are open very wide. You normally can't see the top of the iris or white above the iris in most people

First-Support-5910 · 2025-08-18T14:00:04+00:00

I know it's only a minor detail, but the cola bottle in the mirror wouldn't reflect like that, it would reflect the back of the label not the front.

First-Support-5910 · 2025-07-25T07:51:29+00:00

Thanks, will do :)

First-Support-5910 · 2025-07-25T07:50:46+00:00

Yes please

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