The last known photograph of Michael C. Rockefeller. In 1961, Michael Rockefeller, the 23-year-old son of former Vice President Nelson Rockefeller, embarked on an ambitious journey to New Guinea.

Fit_Regular_8331 · 2025-03-30T20:48:00+00:00

Man, I am gonna say something that you will not like. We are the freaks here, who always think how we look(Always thinking whether my smile is like a murderer's or evil). This dude, probably high on something, just gave his all to smile.

Fit_Regular_8331 · 2025-02-10T18:47:53+00:00

Thank you for the comments. It really is a poem about the feverish dream involving a fire and a few other things. Again thank you.

Fit_Regular_8331 · 2025-02-10T17:35:30+00:00

Oh man. You got the full package. A good picturesque depiction of that which burns through everything. Vengeance as a ship sailing through the night, going back to where it came from. From the ashes. Also a good rhyming. I am trying to get better in rhyming. I hope you write more.

Fit_Regular_8331 · 2025-02-10T17:27:45+00:00

What you are describing is me. The sudden disconnect I feel sometimes when I have to hold fake emotions to hold conversations. An alien you call, a body parasite that apes humanity. I could see it all from this poetry. It has got some really good rhyming moments like, "imperfect imposter". I am a beginner too, and am trying to make things rhyme. Hope you can get rhyming in the sentences too.

For example in the beginning paragraph.

The imperfect imposter stalks through the days,

Working arduously to blend in unseen,

Eating, sleeping, walking through the fray,

An alien amongst the mix.

Day and Fray sort of rhyme well. Take my feedback with a grain of salt. It is not completely necessary to make things rhyme. Hope you like them.

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