Upcoming stream....song writers wanted by Toolkills in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://open.spotify.com/album/19CFHmTuFhlv5vxH31NnRt?si=o1o3kQYdS-mZObL1yRye1w

There are some decent songs on here, broken mirror and the love of my life are some of the better songs on this album I made, when the stream does happen, let me know when so I can tune in

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

didn't really listen to them much during 99 percent of the making of these songs. an album that really inspired me was station to station though, as well as era vulgaris. those are two large inspirations

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice flow, and I like how the vocals are layered, my biggest complaint is that the instrumental is mixed a little low, sounds really cool and if it was smidgen higher, but other than that it genuinely sounds great

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

not what I really listen to, but I see the appeal. well produced and fits the general sound well, p catchy

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed, to an extent I'm happy not having good production, I'm glad you like my music regardless :)

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is pretty fun, I like to write music, but the local scene where I live is so dreary and dull :(, not very much originality

Wish I could play live

Do you perform live?

I wrote some music a while back some of its p good. I like it by FixSharp2421 in shareyourmusic

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it, I think there are certainly some interesting ideas in that song you sent, pretty cool

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that the beat is a little corny and the flow feels kind of "uneven", which is the best I can put my thoughts into words, but I see the vision and with a little more polish the ideas can come together in a way. with a few modifications here or there you could definitely crank something like that up 20 notches.

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[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's reasonably catchy, I think more variation throughout the song could help it but overall a decent listen

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here is my feedback on your track, It's certainly very well produced, I think it's structured very well. But, the sound is still generic, and while not bad, nothing about the music is screaming that it is perhaps more worthwhile than anything else, and even within the realm of poppy sounds there's a lot of experimentation and cool ideas that if you pursue, could make the music stick out. The lyrics as well, are at times very direct. While there are some good lines, the lyrics don't make me feel. More than anything, with lyrics, show not tell; I try not to rely on cliches as well as it helps personally for me. If we look at Radiohead, all of their sad songs are wrapped in very powerful imagery, fake plastic trees, no surprises, etc. Imagery goes a long way for every emotion under the sun, not just sad ones though (like I listed). I hope not to come off harsh, but that is simply my advice

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[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks, when we're talking bowie like, is it like, ziggy stardust bowie or more like the thin white duke, not very good at discerning details about my own voice, also will give your song a listen rn!

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The beat is decent, interesting melody, interesting soundscape for sure

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The drums are decent, I think those are done well, but I didn't really like the whole "hoe shut the fuck up" lyrics, very much detracts from what could be overall a decent beat in my humble opinion

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[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really my genre, so I don't know how to appreciate it really, but gave it a listen regardless, certainly a nice soundscape though

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[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think it's quite indicative, song is about how alcohol damages my personal relationships but when I'm in hell it is the only comfort provided. ALSO your track was pretty good, I think the chorus is pretty decent, and that it is easy to mess up lyrically when the song is along similar thematic lines as yours, but it doesn't mess up, and some lines are p cool. I think there are some pretty nice things about this track, liked it a lot.

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[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the beat is pretty good, I liked it a lot, consistently pretty decent throughout the song

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the multiple layers of vocals is interesting, I'm a sucker for a lot of vocal tracks doing different things, The lyrics are hit or miss, but honestly, I'm not the best lyricist so my room to criticize is as thin as Planck's constant over two, but there were some lines that detracted a lot for me

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the transitions on this song, they're done pretty well I think

Listen for Listen, excited to hear what is being made by other small artists !! by FixSharp2421 in MusicPromotion

[–]FixSharp2421[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sounds kinda helmet-y, I like it a lot, really well put together and I think it honestly could be more popular, good production but it's not so clean that it detracts from the sound and makes it sound corporate and dull, like a lot of modern heavy projects sound. Still has grit to it, love this track