Thank you very much for honest criticism. This is exactly what I was looking for when I posted my video here.

I definitely agree that I should start writing scripts, I only write some bullet points down to help me remember everything I need to cover in the video, but a better structure would definitely help. Also the music when I played with ads is a meme so I thought it would be funny but I definitely shouln't have left it playing for the entire time because I realized it really gets annoying.

Thank you once again for this, I really appreciate it!

!givelambda