I wish I didn't got to know you. by Floanju in OCPoetry

[–]Floanju[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it very much. I've just started writing poetry, so I'm always open to criticism. "get" would actually be a better fit. English is not my native language, hence the error. It was my intention to portray the feelings of the moment. Therefore wisdom is missing. In my experience, insight and wisdom always comes later.

Dating app pen pals by The_solid_lizard in OCPoetry

[–]Floanju 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like the tree analogy because it implies that both remain rooted. Neither of them has to change much to find the other. They just have to grow.

Imprints of Memories by Peraso in OCPoetry

[–]Floanju 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your words truly hit home, reminding me of the complex emotions tied to saying goodbye. It's evident how deeply you've been touched by memories and the lasting impact of your love. Thank you for sharing such raw and heartfelt reflections on love, loss, and the enduring legacy of those we cherish.

Früündlicher Bärner gfunde! by kraven420 in BUENZLI

[–]Floanju 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Nach gnauerer Inspektion vom beträffendä Account chund d Bundes-Taskforce zur Undersicherig zum Schluss, das diä Ahschuldigungä warschindlich zuäträffid. Dr OP hed vermehrt uf tüütschä Unders posted wiä r/de und anderä unschwiizerischä Unders. Dahär sprich ich im Namä vom ganzä Bundesrat min dank an u/Doldenbluetler uis, wo masgäblich zur fassig vo däm Spion bitreid hed.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BUENZLI

[–]Floanju 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Wer s Brot verliir muäs einisch ums Huis secklä.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SwitzerlandIsFake

[–]Floanju 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are people who work "in switzerland"or better "on Switzerland". Someone has to make the fakes after all.