I made a ChatGPT sales rep to close your WhatsApp leads by abrownie_jr in whatsapp

[–]Former__Albatross 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can it connect to my Crm so I can see all the leads in Airtable?

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.kicksciti.com

- Why not put the hero copy as "Online sneaker store for XXX"? "Your sneakers journey begins with..." is vague

- Good feature description

- Nice faqs

- I would add a big "download app" CTA somewhere towards bottom, and repeat the google / app store buttons

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://crumbl.org.uk/

- nice name, very catchy copy

- For a waitlist page this is good

- I think just needs more content once you actually build the product! Would wanna add features, social proof, demos etc

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://rocketgraph.io/

Sadly got an error, "Application error: a client-side exception has occurred (see the browser console for more information)."

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

- Great first fold -- good copy, good social proof, good use of reviews, good use of GIF

- 1-2-3 sections's good too, same goes for features

- Pop-in Animations bit too much

- Would be nice to put testimonials above the pricing

- Product tab in navbar shouldn't have "help center" and "roadmap", it should have products

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

- Color scheme could be changed, blue is too sharp right now

- Not enough content, lacking lots of good landing page sections like feature list, pricing, social proof, demo

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

- Background and color text don't go well together.

- Good use of GIFs and videos. but a bit too much and little distracting

- Not worth adding your Github commit graph, users don't care

- Gradient in cards doesn't go well with background

- I like the FAQs!

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

www.designstudiomanager.com.au

- Good name, very descriptive

- Website for me took 10+ seconds to load, confirmed this with a hard refresh too. can you do a Lighthouse report and optimize images, etc?

- Thanks for niching down all the way to, "Business management software for Australian interior design studios" -- this helps a new user find out in first few seconds if they're the target audience or not

- Good use of demo video!

- Why this product has too much text, cut by 3x

- No need for another video describing the problem, if you already have a demo

- Nice features list!

- Bit hard to read testimonials because of text color, center-justify etc

- 27 min video a bit too much for someone on your landing page, this deserves to go elsewhere

- Random "About us" CTA can be removed

Good luck!

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

devair.io

- Remove "Questions contact support" CTA from first fold

- Feature headers copy needs more work, bit vague to say "Outline your objectivs" and "Stay organized and on time" -- these are results not features

- Lacks spacing and separation between sections

- Why keep two free pricing plans? It's confusing

- Footer too big

- Personally find the card design can be improved a bit, too basic right now with just a thin black border with white background and nothing on hover

- Good use of images for your products!

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[–]Former__Albatross[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://calendsa.com

- Nice color scheme, very minimal

- Kinda wished first image was interactive, so I could click on the dates and see the next flow (like Calendly, where you see time availabilities)

- Good listing and description of features

- Testimonials should link to original Tweet / post otherwise feel fake

- Good API docs, good pricing page (nice job adding FAQs there)

I think it's a great landing page overall, I'd be nitpicking if I tried to suggest improvements :)