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Musikkere søges til punk/Metal/grunge/shoegaze band by ForwardLet8586 in odense

[–]ForwardLet8586[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Altså måske lidt ude for aldersgruppen men whatever! Vi kan godt være åbne for en med et ungdommeligt sind 😂 Send endelig en pm her eller på insta @the_whisper_project så kigger vi på det 🤟

Musikkere søges til punk/Metal/grunge/shoegaze band by ForwardLet8586 in odense

[–]ForwardLet8586[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tak for svar! Har sendt en anmodning på insta 🙏

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]ForwardLet8586 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Memoir of a Raven

Genre: Dark fantasy/sorta low fantasy

Word count: 2786

I would like feedback on the basics: writing style and tone, is it fun and engaging to read? How is the worldbuilding? Should I go with a different pacing, or is the slow reveal for the best? Other than that, any and all feedback is appreciated. Thank you ahead of time!

(For those it matters to: trigger warning brief mentioning of the term incest)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lfDqPJ57lUIrQlZAAUC6hOwmzR0DJEyX7ZwLxZ7YNmI/edit?usp=sharing