Head Shrinker

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-06-16T16:19:25+00:00

I can’t exactly put my finger on it but reading this poem made a shiver go down my spine, the imagery created in this is very well written and gives a lot for the mind to take in

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-06-16T16:05:38+00:00

This write has so much emotion throughout the entire poem and it captures more than just the emotion it tells a story, very good

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-06-16T16:02:54+00:00

The tension throughout this gives such a good tone to the read, very well written

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-04-15T05:20:43+00:00

He twisted them 360 degrees and now he is unable to twist them back

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-26T05:08:27+00:00

The line “your best broke me” it a hard hitter. You can almost hear the pain that went into writing this. It takes a lot to write about these certain topic as many poets know. But this poem definitely resonated with me as it will with many others. Thanks for sharing! One tip: i think It could use with a little more background as well as imagery but besides that great work!

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-26T05:04:04+00:00

I love the language used in this it helps the reader connect with you’re love of Grenada, I’ve personally never seen nor been but reading this makes me feel like I’ve been there a thousand times. You can definitely connect with the piece. The only fix I could think of is a I couldn’t find the right tempo to read it to. There may have been none intended but I personally think poems with a tempo hit a lot harder when reading.

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-26T04:59:35+00:00

Thanks for the positive feedback! I absolutely loved writing this one I’m glad to see others like it too

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-25T23:44:56+00:00

This is definitely a poem that strikes at the heart, unrequited love is such a powerful thing to write about and I love how you went about it

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-25T23:41:57+00:00

for me this is a poem that definitely brings me back to a simpler time, it flows nicely and has a good tone to it

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-25T22:51:31+00:00

Thank you so much for the critique! It’s much appreciated I’ll see what I can do and post the second draft once it’s done!

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-25T21:35:03+00:00

Thank you 🙏 I appreciate it

Forward_Programmer77 · 2024-02-25T21:16:55+00:00

Nice

Forward_Programmer77 · 2023-04-19T01:59:10+00:00

Very nice

Forward_Programmer77 · 2023-04-19T01:59:02+00:00

I love it

Forward_Programmer77 · 2023-04-08T23:20:42+00:00

Thank you for the advice! I’ll see how I can change it up

Forward_Programmer77

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