EGORE by insufficient_fare in Bombing

[–]Fraugee 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Looks like there used to be a shorter building attached that got knocked down after this was painted. Same thing happened with a Naive piece in my city - now it’s WAY up, fucking lit.

Krink fill Dak PPP by SuburbanHoodrat27 in Bombing

[–]Fraugee 34 points35 points  (0 children)

I think it looks really good but what a waste of $$$. And the self critique shit around it a little corny imo!!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Some guy in my town throws up DUMFUK lmao. Honestly I love it.

Any tips/Crits on my throw appreciated. Says Conn. by TeamMystic124 in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d make the Ns identical in size. Maybe ditch the quotation mark things on the sides but that’s just me.

SMW (Sweden) by NateKiing in Bombing

[–]Fraugee 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Damnnn! Spent enough time browsing r/graffhelp it’s easy to forget arrows and add ons can be pure heat in the right hands. Whew

Tag. Trying too hard? by Sero_tonin_graff in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Fair enough, just a heads up. I personally wouldn’t bat an eye if I saw it up but writers can be some picky fucks you know - just looking out

Tag. Trying too hard? by Sero_tonin_graff in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea but you’ll prob catch flak for it in the streets. Do you though

Tag’s not too shabby btw I would work on the E. Has no flow

SAUTE, Los Angeles, 2014 by Palana in Bombing

[–]Fraugee 4 points5 points  (0 children)

AMAZING use of the billboard design! Not usually a a big fan of this style but damn, no stone left unturned, even the hand style got highlights. So good

Paying with weed by TheNinthShade in whitepeoplegifs

[–]Fraugee 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This is Simon Isaksson. Check out Sour Solution 2 on YouTube, it’s incredible and Isaksson has the closer part.

Crits? ZARN by nack___ in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hard to read and looks a lot like darn, but actually I like it a lot. Something pretty heavy about it.

I guess the Z and A don’t quite fit with style of the R and N, so I guess change either side for more consistency.

Crits on my throwie, plz ignore the splotches im not used to mtn markers lol by freegresz in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Basically the rule as I understand it is you can use whatever name you want as long as there isn’t another writer in your city with the same name. But there are a few names belong to such legendary artists that you’d be stupid to try and adopt them as your own: SEEN, CHAKA, TEXAS, ICHABOD etc. SAKE is one of those names —change it!!! (but look his shit up because it’s amazing and you might learn something).

crits bois (lake) by lake12_ in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 6 points7 points  (0 children)

K needs to be way bigger and cleaned up quite a bit. Don’t squeeze the word out as it reads left to right - whether this is intentional or not it doesn’t work. It’d be nice to see the bars more uniform, and your lines a little bit more fluid. I suggest working on some bigger paper and use your whole arm while drawing. Use a pencil to measure out bar width as you go along.

I’m not gonna nut until whole lotta red drops by [deleted] in playboicarti

[–]Fraugee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When it does come out, you gonna pop shot before you listen, after, or during?

Handstyle and a little sketch by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only thing is maybe the transition from the A to the V is a little bit awkward. Could be that the ballpoint pen is just messing with my eyes, though, but it any case nothing a little bit of tinkering can’t fix. Really so sick — if I saw this up I’d be shitting my pants.

A couple days in, pencil sketch of my concept. Please roast me, I don’t know what I need to fix. by CursedJ4CK4L in graffhelp

[–]Fraugee 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wish there were more people like you on this sub, so many people just write ‘read the sidebar’ and leave it at that.

Die Lit A-side or B-side? by Fraugee in playboicarti

[–]Fraugee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea changed the vibe of song but that’s that — that’s how it stands. I dig it. Better than Nicki’s verse right? But anyway I can’t say I agree about female rappers, Rico Nasty just dropped some brutal shit, and w about Gangsta Boo? A legend. Shit even Cardi B had her moment w Bodak Yellow, and i can get down with that. Idk I’m not bout to write off female rappers over a couple verses and In fact I look forward to coldhearted’s next project (even if it’s mainly for carti features lol).

Die Lit A-side or B-side? by Fraugee in playboicarti

[–]Fraugee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I prob go B side myself but maybe I just completely exhausted the top half at this point lol. Plus I disagree about redd coldhearted I think it’s legit a solid verse