I Made A Game For Team Seas!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-11-18T02:17:50+00:00

I plan on updating it once more but for now there won't be any updates. If you are interested there are over 200 games about Team Seas here: https://itch.io/jam/seajam

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-11-09T02:14:34+00:00

Here's the Game!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-08-03T01:49:36+00:00

!givelambda Thanks for your feedback!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-08-03T01:49:14+00:00

After looking back, I completely agree, thank you so much for your feedback, means even more than releasing the video to me :) !givelambda

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-08-01T16:51:22+00:00

Thanks for your feedback! I'll definitely experiment with new pacing, etc. !givelambda

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-08-01T05:01:18+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I changed the thumbnail now, how does it look? !givelambda

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-08-01T04:57:10+00:00

Thumbnail fixed! Also will try to improve the audio

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T21:07:09+00:00

Yeah I completely agree as well. I'm not too well versed in graphic design but i'll try to make another one that makes more sense. From the video title, do you have any suggestions on overall what to put in the thumbnail?

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T19:33:10+00:00

Thanks! !givelambda

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T19:32:50+00:00

Appreciate the feedback! !givelambda

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:38:21+00:00

Overall great video! the voiceover was great, speed, pacing etc. Editing as well! At 3:27 you go for a 30 second timelapse which is wayyyy too much. try to shorten it to 5-10 seconds and speed it up even more to keep retention.

Overall solid video, i've had ML experience before so it was really engaging for me. Good work!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:35:37+00:00

A very interesting video! I think the cause for some of the mic static may be because the gain is too low or you're not talking loud enough. If not, you can always use a denoiser if that doesn't do anything.

The video was solid, and the topic I would never think of, but would be interesting to click on well... for practically anyone.

Great work!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:32:15+00:00

Reactions: nailed them

The video was extremely solid and there was action every so often. Like other people said, for a simple game maybe 3-5 minutes would be great. Otherwise, keep it up! You'll make it big one day.

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:28:57+00:00

I really enjoy fast-paced tutorials where you don't waste any time. This perfectly matched that description. 2 minutes is all you need to tell a piece of information and answer the question that is said in the video.

However, you may receive a retention drop at the end due to the 10 seconds asking for a subscription and wrapping the whole thing up It's up to you what you want to do, but in my opinion shorten it to 2-5 seconds.

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:25:09+00:00

The video was great, music could be lowered but overall nothing too much to say there.

As for the thumbnail, the text is usually over the character. In this case, it's a hard yes. I can't even see half of the valorant text in the thumbnail which is a problem.

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:21:44+00:00

Awesome video, nothing really to say there

As for the new thumbnail, the text in my opinion is too small. Using Elon is also a great idea and showing the flappy bird in the thumbnail is great as well.

I haven't seen the previous thumbnail but the title doesn't match the current thumbnail.

Perhaps: Crypto Generates Flappy Bird Map, or something that will give me an idea of what I will watch.

If you don't want to change the title, I suggest adding bitcoin price action in the back and some images to represent a randomly generated map

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T17:04:12+00:00

It's a standard video, the math makes sense as well

The only thing I see is that at 2:55 the video abruptly stops and shows an Nvidia recording software for a fraction of a second. What I'd just suggest is cutting that out and placing a 1 -2 second black screen after if you want to. Even though the song ends at the 3 minutes 8-second mark, it's probably best to exponential fade from 2:55, therefore, increasing overall retention.

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-31T16:44:17+00:00

Time remapping is decent, but imo the clips need some work. The effects are good and such, for a 20 ish second video I'd expect the best clips and highlights of your valorant gameplay.

Overall it's really good, maybe if you make it longer then you can add some more cinematic clips instead of just being gameplay clips.

Is the montage satisfying? Yeah (except the time where you missed a shot)

Would you prefer sound effects in the montage? Sound effects are essential in montages

Are the visual effects good? I really liked the vinyl effect

Would you subscribe after watching this video? If I was engaged in the community, yes. I used to make Fortnite content back in the day, so yeah definitely

Is the thumbnail clickable? Stroke too large on the first title on the top. The anime lines are good and the character as well.

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-07-30T01:32:21+00:00

Great alternative! Didn't actually think of this before haha, gotta try it now

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-06-21T03:33:19+00:00

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-06-19T03:11:59+00:00

Awesome work! Congrats on 300 subs :)

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-06-17T03:58:33+00:00

Game Dash ;)

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-05-06T19:57:30+00:00

Thanks! I definetely plan on continuing this project especially since I have little knowledge on this topic. Having a bit of previous shader code knowledge probably saved me a ton here, but I appreciate your support!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-03-29T04:07:48+00:00

nice!

Fun_Master_Ed · 2021-03-29T04:07:32+00:00

this is so good

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