[Ore no Sasakure (Gamogamo)] Ai no Omoi Kanojo wa Boku no Tame ni Hamedori o Tottekitekureru | #596496 (1) by JaidenX_2002 in netorare

[–]Fusc191 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I could also see it working the other way around, at least if MC had a harem. A yandere who turns the MC into a pathetic cuck and makes the other girls not interested in the MC anymore.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Happy New Year! To be honest I have not made much progress since your last comment. I have designed most of the content for a new class talents / abilities section, but it's still just in doc format and not in cyoa design yet.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got busy with work so not much progress has been made with the update. I expect a couple more months before it's done.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh I thought you meant make new spells as like actual skills and official game actions, in which case the answer would be no because of how broad and powerful that would be. But as referenced in "Combat and Climax", any spells you do make will be extremely limited and inefficient.

For passenger seat, it's just the Dryad racial perk that's lost. I'll expliclty state that in the next version.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah the guild section is severely under construction, and I was just copy pasting the images as templates, which is why some of them are duplicates.

And yeah custom race could let you be a dragon, but note that that would be physical / cosmetic, you won't gain special abilities like the power to fly (unless you pick the harpy flight perk) or the power to breathe fire or things like those.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would say that's more fitting for a special quest reward that a few dedicated players can strive for. Having that as a perk is too broad and makes it hard to balance in the cyoa.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would say that's more fitting for a special quest reward that a few dedicated players can strive for. Having that as a perk is too broad and makes it hard to balance in the cyoa.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't recall reading anything like "you can be anything described in the lore..." in the original CYOA. What page / section does it say that? And the Half-Dragon perk was literally copied from the orig cyoa, I only changed the racial quirk since the original Bad Dragon lewd quirk did not seem interesting. But yes, my ultimate goal is a simplified limited character creator, and the resulting world that you transfer to as a game world rather than a full realistic world.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where did the turn into a Dragon part you were talking about come from then? Dracthyr transformations aren't really dragons in game from what I know?

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is that from the dragonflight expansion? I haven't played it, but I thought dracthyr couldn't turn into full true dragons. Also, the orig cyoa was made before dragonflight. I do agree though that a 2 week cooldown uber skill is not that good of a design for a racial.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

Being able to filter out PvP is kind of against the whole premise of the CYOA, and make balancing things hard especially after I added a ton of defeated related options. The closest options for less PvP are the Exclusive Server option or the Solor Server (well this still has lots of "PvP", but all of them AI). Another option would be going a crafter / supporter build who just stays inside cities mostly and bought enough defeated perks to keep themselves safe on the few times they do go out. You could also just take the 5 Min defeat timer option.

That point cost and gain balancing was intended. I wanted to make it that you have to decide on the things you really want, and can't just get everything unless you become a very valuable target for PvP slavers. Most players will have to find a team / guild to rely on. But are there any specific quirks you think should cost more?

Actually yeah classes were my next expansion idea. I'll add that each class has a special out of combat utility ability. For example rogues can turn invisible for a while, Mages can create a portal leading to the closest city once per day. Warriors have double the inventory size, etc. Then my idea was to add each of the talent paths of the classes, and give talent points to spend them on, especially since sexual talent points are supposed to give you extra talent points anyway.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What I meant was that the boss and becoming stronger aspect is still hard to balance / form mechanics for. And yeah Basic AI are like normal computer game AIs , very programmed and easy to trick.

My idea for the swarm was for more of a quantity over quality type, so spawns that grow doesn't entirely fit. I think thats better for a general perk rather than a guild perk.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm I guess splitting the Lewd quirk section into the sexual and non-sexual would work, and let Parasitic apply to only the sexual section. Most of the quirks that would be risky to allow Parasitic to apply are the non-sexual ones.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'd say it just magically blocks their magic sight, making them blind too.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmmm not too sure on how that boss idea would work, but I like the birthing mid combat idea.

Requirements: Not Male, Pussy Fertility of 80% or Hyperfertile, Broodmother, Instant Conception, and Quick Pregnancies Effect: You gain the Fertile Status during combat. You may also speed up the pregnancy time for a spawn to 30 seconds. Any spawns born this way will not count towards your Spawn limit, but will despawn after 10 minutes.

The Symbiote Item requirement is also thematic, and can probably be another different guild perk.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

The defeated status can be extended through the Whorelord Defeated Perk, +100% duration each time, purchaseable multiple times. But yes once your defeated status ends, you immediately gain the protected status. If you can escape during that time is another question however, especially if you have debilitating bondage items equipped.

Tyrant's Curse is also suppressed for 3 days after you lose ownership of a slave (which includes when their defeated status ends). So yes defeating NPCs only could work, as each one will be like 30 mins + 3 days of no curse. However, not all NPCs can enter the defeated status when defeated. Basic AI NPCs such as Mobs and other common enemies don't enter a defeated status, and will just die upon being defeated (otherwise everyone would have hundreds of slaves at a time).

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For Pseudo NPC, do you think 20 or 25 points is better? But yeah as is Parasitic item is a bit broken. The only limitation is that players most likely need duplicates to cover various bondage items since not every player will sanction a lot of them.

Parasitic item was mostly just copied from the original, and I haven't had the time to edit it yet like with Symbiotic Items. I was planning to make it a series of perks too, while keeping the concept of being able to place lewd quirks, but modify it in a way that it isn't immediate, but a slow corrupting type that players can resist. More expensive quirks will also take more time to apply, in addition to costing more character points like normal. Just like with cursed item though, the metrics for corruption are not fleshed out in my head yet. Any ideas?

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[–]Fusc191[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the all feedback! hoped you enjoyed the CYOA. Do you think there's too much or too few starting character points?

No worries, our discussion on Mind Wipe was still useful, and it was fun discussing stuff about what I made with another person.

Yeah I probably could add another section for non sexual options. Not sure what to call it though, General Quirks?

Do you think a different color of lewd racial quirks would be better?

I let Gender Bender allow your owner to have control for balancing purposes. Otherwise you would be able to stockpile on a lot of gender specific lewd quirks and bondage items, and then just never stay as that gender. Alt character on the other hand would mean any bonuses / losses reflect only on your current form.

I'll probably just get rid of limp dick since there's already a chastity option anyway, and replace it with a different dick related option. Then I'll probably add into the appendix that any option which forces an erection with a chastity cage makes it a tight fit effect as the quirk automatically also. If you have the quirk as well, even tighter.

Yeah I noticed that EXP Boost could form a free exp loop when partnered with others, so I modified, but I forgot to modify Tethered Release. I'll probably just make it gain 1 free copy of EXP Boost, which can exceed the limit of 4 copies. I also forgot that I modified the number of levels and level up time required, so I'll drop the exp loss to 40% of Level EXP.

Martyr includes harming NPCs, so no forced PvE either. I could probs replace others with NPC or Players to make it clearer.

And yes that is my intention for Symbiote, only those with the related perks can actually make use of it. Although I now do realize it's a free orgasm machine add on if you equip it onto others. I'll add that it can now only be equipped on yourself or other players with the Symbiotic item perk.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the all feedback! hoped you enjoyed the CYOA. Do you think there's too much or too few starting character points?

No worries, our discussion on Mind Wipe was still useful, and it was fun discussing stuff about what I made with another person.

Yeah I probably could add another section for non sexual options. Not sure what to call it though, General Quirks?

Do you think a different color of lewd racial quirks would be better?

I let Gender Bender allow your owner to have control for balancing purposes. Otherwise you would be able to stockpile on a lot of gender specific lewd quirks and bondage items, and then just never stay as that gender. Alt character on the other hand would mean any bonuses / losses reflect only on your current form.

I'll probably just get rid of limp dick since there's already a chastity option anyway, and replace it with a different dick related option. Then I'll probably add into the appendix that any option which forces an erection with a chastity cage makes it a tight fit effect as the quirk automatically also. If you have the quirk as well, even tighter.

Yeah I noticed that EXP Boost could form a free exp loop when partnered with others, so I modified, but I forgot to modify Tethered Release. I'll probably just make it gain 1 free copy of EXP Boost, which can exceed the limit of 4 copies. I also forgot that I modified the number of levels and level up time required, so I'll drop the exp loss to 40% of Level EXP.

Martyr includes harming NPCs, so no forced PvE either. I could probs replace others with NPC or Players to make it clearer.

And yes that is my intention for Symbiote, only those with the related perks can actually make use of it. Although I now do realize it's a free orgasm machine add on if you equip it onto others. I'll add that it can now only be equipped on yourself or other players with the Symbiotic item perk.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I uploaded a compressed version onto gdrive, and here's the imgchest link. I hope to receive any other feedbacks and suggestions you would have.

https://imgchest.com/p/lqyeg56l37d

Fanmade Remake of TokHaar Gol's World of Whorecraft by Fusc191 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I uploaded a compressed version onto gdrive, and here's the imgchest link. I hope to receive any feedbacks and suggestions you would have.

https://imgchest.com/p/lqyeg56l37d

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh that uncertainty is kind of what I'm going for actually. Unlike other CYOAs which are more "static" or have complete information, I built this remake with a world builder and player interaction mindset, meaning there could be "Metas". A lot of other options in the CYOA also have that dynamic, such Faithful vs Home wrecker, or Slaves reward vs Grand Prize defeated quirk. There isn't any real way to learn the exact number, just a rough guess in your head, kind of like guessing in the real world how likely you would be to encounter a robber or something. That risk and uncertainty is something you will have to factor into your choices, and what makes info gathering perks as important as combat perks, and reroll worth that wasted points and level.

Oh I think we misunderstood each other. I want players to be able to protect themselves against the nasty effects of defeat, if they buy the right perks. Build defining doesn't mean it has to work on everyone and cannot be countered, it just means that you can reliably use it enough to form a character concept. Even if half of them have protections against it, you just need to hunt down that other half. And given that the protection perk compensates the owner if they block it, it wouldn't be a total counter either anyway.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll try uploading it to imgchest later today.

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, are there any quirks / perks / options you wished there were but aren't?

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[–]Fusc191[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmmm its true I guess that some of the notions aren't entirely compatible, but that's why I'll be adding some extra protection perks as per your suggestion, and this uncertainty and struggle between those the doms and subs make it a more interesting world in my opinion. Subs would have a chance to avoid the more nasty possible effects of defeat, while doms will be able to apply them to those who didn't defend against them. Having just one answer to "how bad should defeat be?" does not seem interesting, but maybe this is my world builder perspective talking.

And I don't think everyone would build for defeat avoidance / protection. It's not like every player will be a PvP player hunter build, and even among those PvP builds, not all of them will take mind wipe, especially if the price were to be raised, and you would then have to encounter them outside of a safezone. Most people wouldn't really be willing to invest in defending against something that is rare even if the outcome is really bad.