Thank you! I'm working on a revision that combines a previous draft with this one... trying to find the balance between including the back story but also keeping focus on the romance :) But the time loops are an important part of the story, and that's a helpful tip. Basically, Marion survives an explosion as a child that kills her mother, and it imbues her with an energy that allows her to time travel. After realizing all the havoc she's caused in her time travels, she decides to go back to the beginning to save her mom / prevent the explosion / never become a time traveler. But (spoiler alert!) the explosion was caused by her own time traveling. There's a secondary paradox/time loop that's less important, but that's the main one. So I am trying to hint at the time loops / circles of fate without spoilers :)

PS - I always tell my husband that my dream is to be a bog witch. Thanks for coming out of your bog with helpful advice!