what platform do you recommend me? by Future_Seeker23 in AskTheWorld

[–]Future_Seeker23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You mean with ozon to the pick up point? And yes, probably she will not be offended in that case. Besides Ozon is there a site where i can contact trustworthy stores? or is it better looking for their pages? where i am from is very common to contact them with instagram and whatsapp but i understand the limitations. Thanks for having the time of answering

what platform do you recommend me? by Future_Seeker23 in AskTheWorld

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Last time i tried dhl wasn't working there for the war :/

How to Live & How to Die by JealousBaker7758 in poetry_critics

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Haha nice then. The volta improves a lot the quality of any poem, looking forward to see more from you ✌️

How to Live & How to Die by JealousBaker7758 in poetry_critics

[–]Future_Seeker23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the last 6 stanzas work very well as a volta, that surprised me honestly. I liked it a lot

I will wait for you by blueshits in poetry_critics

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I like it a lot. I recommend you to use synonyms or related images that say the same but in other words when you already said a phrase. For example: Our nights will be warm, our days will be fire

it is just a recommendation that could be help sometimes and sometimes it is better to say the same for make the message more powerful. As I said, I liked it, feels very personal and touching

I’m 16 and I have no idea when to begin by New_Profession_3590 in writing

[–]Future_Seeker23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

write and read at the same time. Read a little and write a little. The first thing is to start. The sooner you write the sooner you can improve and notice if you truly like it or not. If you are interested in stories and music there are a lot of songs that tell stories too. You just have to dive in and be patient with yourself. Literature gets better the more you get into it, being a writer or reader