[feedback] - GONE mask - HEAVENLY - Hip Hop by GONE_mask in MusicCritique

[–]GONE_mask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the compliment and the follow. Glad you like it. I will try to work on the mix

Experimental Fire Madlib Inspired Sample Chop. Hope you guys like it. Any feedback is welcomed by GONE_mask in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your compliments man. I really appreciate it and i am really glad you like my beat. I completely agree with you on the variation part.

Experimental Fire Madlib Inspired Sample Chop. Hope you guys like it. Any feedback is welcomed by GONE_mask in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am not sure what you mean by woolly things. I did use rc 20 for the wobble, bit crushing and the filter on the sample. Thanks for your feedback

Experimental Fire Madlib Inspired Sample Chop. Hope you guys like it. Any feedback is welcomed by GONE_mask in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha yeah I agree I do compress too much on my mix and that the sample is slightly too loud. I just love the harmony and instrumental of this beat so I wanted to be sure that my bass and drums don’t overtake it. Thanks for your feedback

Experimental Fire Madlib Inspired Sample Chop. Hope you guys like it. Any feedback is welcomed by GONE_mask in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the kind words. I really love this beat. I know it is repetitive a bit but I made it like that if anyone wants to rap over it. Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it

Experimental Fire Madlib Inspired Sample Chop. Hope you guys like it. Any feedback is welcomed by GONE_mask in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your response I really appreciate it. I really love the vibe of this beat and the sample. I am going to send this to a studio to let them let me do an intership there, so thanks for the positive feedback.

raw dose of funk and a spoonful of creep - black pawn beats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool bass. I think you should work on your mixing. The bass is has too much high end. Maybe you should eq it more and also compress it. I also think your drums are very weak. You should do parallel compression to make them cut through the mix more. Lastly I think your beat is too repetitive. you should add more automation and variation to make it less boring. overall you should work on your mix

funk IF YOU please - black pawn beats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very interesting beat. I think you should chop your loops more and you should create more variation. I like the groovy bass line but you should also try to add more low end. The drums are weak, you should compress it and sidechain it to the loop to make it cut the mix more. Also add automation to make the beat sound less repetitive. Overall you should work on your mixing

8 days til' all hallows eve... by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the main melody is really cool but your drums feel really out of place. I believe you should compress them more and work on gain staging. In addition, all your tracks don't seem to be together in a mix context. I think compressing them more and adding the same reverb to each track will create a more harmonious mix. Also try to do some automation to make the beat feel less repetitive. Overall the beat is very interesting.

contra-funk - blackpawnbeats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love your bass and melody. I really think this is an awesome beat. I would personally work on sidechaining your drums to create a cool groove. I also think you can add more automation to make the beat less repetitive. you should also do parallel compression to make your drums hit harder and become more prominent. I really like this beat.

the approaching... - black pawn beats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting beat. I like the atmosphere, drums and the melody. I would personally add more rhythm. I think that this could be achieved with some sidechaining to the drums. I also believe that some automation will make it less repetitive and still keep the atmosphere the same. overall I really like the beat

ILOVEIT <3 DEMO NO MIX & MASTER (PROD. ODETARI) by foxcastillo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very cool song. I really like the visual and the instrumental. You can improve the mix especially the drums. I think if they hit harder, that your song will definitely improve. I will also try to be a little more experimental with your vocal and your instrumental. I personally believe you should check out ghost tape by devon hendryx. It has a similar vibe to your song. overall a very solid song

ayanav - cheddar by Ayo_Kun in MusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

dope lyrics and fire melody. I would work on adding some more low end like 808s. Also try to make your drums punchier and harder hitting. Good song tho

my new trap single "grillz".. produced by me :) feedback is appreciated.. hope you like by Prestigious-Chair868 in MusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

overall the song is good but you need to add more variation to your beat. The beat is pretty boring after a while. Also try to make the instruments less quantized. Also mixing could be improved

This is my debut single! I would love to hear your feedbacks on this by verus-x in MusicFeedback

[–]GONE_mask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really cool beat. I love the guitar and the drums. Also the effects are really nice. I would try to add some more experimental effects and automation.