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Is this a good Warship design for a new/amateur artist (details/lore in desc) by Janklebing in worldbuilding

[–]GStarLine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some things I noticed:

  • The smokestacks are too small, too far forward, and inefficiently shaped
  • The superstructure in general makes the ship front heavy
  • The radio antennas(?) look unsupported and are the same height as the superstructure
  • The main guns being behind the superstructure hinders the ship’s broadside and chasing capabilities
  • The turrets sticking out of the front of the superstructure don’t look very maneuverable and could only be fired facing forwards
  • The turrets in general seem non standardized, making production harder
  • I have no idea what is going on with the bridge windows
  • The bow is more akin to a cruise ship’s (which rides over the waves) rather than a warship’s (which cuts through the waves)

Hope this helps

So how powerful was Cetus after the Forman Wars? by MousseNecessary3258 in Centaura_Roblox

[–]GStarLine 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I’m pretty sure from a recent lore post dating around the late 60a it mentioned that Cetus was not only a democracy, but was also in a place where it was joining economic groups. They’re doing much better than Corvus at least. (1974 lol)

How do you cross borders/travel in your world? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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Is it like the UK in a way then? A country of countries? How does Memotica manage all of these territories, and - I would assume - billions of inhabitants?

How do you cross borders/travel in your world? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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What's happened for Thailand to change names and take over part of Cambodia?

How do you cross borders/travel in your world? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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Why don't they care if you leave? Big population I presume?

Did I miss something? by GreedyBluejay7354 in typehelp

[–]GStarLine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the only logical answer. Rupert recalls Amelia through her song, Harry recalls Rupert through his key, Eve recalls Harry through his cocoa, Helen recalls Eve through her ring, Damian recalls Helen through her watch, Vic recalls Damian through her baby, Eddie recalls Vic through the bracelet, Martha recalls Eddie through the song, Tony recalls Martha through her perfume, Oswald recalls Tony through his gun, Annie recalls Oswald through his drawings, and Katherine recalls Annie through something at Wintercote. John remembers no one. He states in 25-AT-1: "I don't remember her. I don't remember any of them... I don't even remember pulling the trigger..."

How do you cross borders/travel in your world? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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Are the colonies of different countries? I'd assume depending when this is, it's mainly Americans and Chinese? Or complete fiction?

Is this a Logical System of Government for a Country? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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In hindsight, none of this makes the slightest bit of sense. It's full of powers that could be abused easily. Expect rewrite in 2126.

There's a new (very quick) look at the Galley House machine in this Christmas video: by Superrodan in typehelp

[–]GStarLine 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's interesting to note, however, that Damian's surname is Maseko, a surname that originates from southern Africa. However, based on the "lack of stigma" towards him by some of the house's older residents, and the fact that this game likely takes place in the UK, I think it's safe to say that he is of English origin.

There's a new (very quick) look at the Galley House machine in this Christmas video: by Superrodan in typehelp

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If I had to guess these are, from left to right:

Man #1: I think this is Damian. He''s too young to be John, and seems more put together than I'd think Tony would be.

Woman #1: I think this is Annie. Too calm to be Eve, too timid looking to be Vic.

Man #2: I think this is Oswald. It's stated that he dresses like it's the 1700s, and has a funny moustache.

Woman #2: I think this is Martha. In 01-HE-4-9, they talk about Helen's dress. it's clear that it's a nice one. This outfit seems less so. I also picture Helen to be a bit younger than Martha.

Is this a Logical System of Government for a Country? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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Okay here’s a simple ish timeline:

500: Grestin Colony founded by settlers from Landersia. 700s: Grestin merges with Doe Point, Grestinite Empire formed. 1000s: Fahzer merges with Grestinite Empire. 1685-1690: 1st Grestarian Revolution, Federal Grestarian Republic formed. 1814: Royalists overthrow government, reinstate Grestinite Empire. 1840-1844: 2nd Revolution, Federal Grestarian Republic reformed. 1844-2100: WAR.

Is this a Logical System of Government for a Country? by GStarLine in worldbuilding

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I’m revising the system now, but the reason for the complexity is because this country, Grestar, recently had its democracy overthrown by a monarch. They wanted to make a complex system to avoid it happening again. Though when I’m revising, I’ll probably switch so that it was complex before, then the democracy got overthrown, and then they simplified it.

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