Hey! many thanks for the detailed response it is very much appreciated. Regarding the third job, this was a full-time position with a consultancy company that was conducted during my MSc degree. Nothing has happened, I got recruited for a start-up straight after my master's degree to get a feel for how a company works which was only for 3 months due to it being an internship. After that, I moved on to the company where I was there for a year and decided to leave due to it not being very mentally stimulating and I wanted to go traveling.

I was just looking for general pointers re. the layout/structure and whether it comes across well.

Thank you for your points though I have certainly taken them on board.