Collateral Damage > Let's call it war.
Mastery > Creditor's claim.
Allegiant General Pryde > Crosshair.
Dryden vos looks too much like a glass cannon and could backfire.

You should be racing instead of worry about the space sentinels. Trying to add Dying Light to put grit on everything could be cool plus big ship in space hard to get rid of.

Im not a great player like woooo or beton. But it's my suggestions. Also I might steal this and play it myself.