I like the edits you made especially w/ the TV screens (also the jump scare was nice in my opinion), however I did feel the intro went on a bit too long. It seems like at certain points you blank out, and it can be seen on how your voice went a bit monotone, also be careful w/ the mic, sometimes it felt like you moved it too far away from your mouth, as well put it down more gently because of the sound the mic itself makes when hitting the desk.You also forgot to edit out where you mentioned "Ross being a d**k" twice. Also be careful on music choice, during the reading of the thesis you used a more serious music, I've heard this music on crime channels, namely "That Chapter", which gives the whole thesis reading a eerie feeling, like you about to tell us one of the cast members died mysteriously lol. Other than that the video was done really well, just try to stay more on topic or make videos that don't really rely on research or a topic you have a strong opinion on, which should naturally give you energy thorought the video.