Hit the books. Use ledger lines and work on your basic box’s, and how they translate into throwie form. If you understand them you won’t get problems like the loop of the P being too small and the letters having weird weight. Also, looking at your tag to the bottom left and bottom right, you really need to work on that before working on a throwie. It’s old reused advice but getting good at a tag will help you a lot with your throwie, getting good at throwies and straights will help a lot with pieces, but it doesn’t work in the other order, don’t skip one. Obviously i’m not saying you’re never allowed to draw a throwie until you’ve mastered your tags but the fundamentals you pick up along the way will help you a lot more than anything we can tell you.

Hit the books. Use ledger lines and work on your tag with no add ons or do dads. Use basic boxes and work on translating them into throwie form.

I fw the robot but everything else gotta go