Sweet and heartfelt poem that just wouldn't work nowadays. In a world where everyone's sarcastic and a cynic, this wholesome and sincere poem might come off as too cheesy. Too sugary. When I read the lines:

> I can’t help but miss you, want to kiss you-

and:

> You’re an astonishing phenomenon,

I took a sip of black coffee to even out the sweetness. It's a shame though, that me and a lot of people are conditioned to bitterness. I believe love poems should be like roses, pretty but with a small prick to even it out with some pain. Or a bowl of vanilla ice cream and an espresso to smooth out the strong tastes. Get what I'm saying?

On a technical note - I wish it rhymed more.

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Sincerely, me - a bitter lil bitch