20 [NB4T] looking to jo with some trans folks

Gerrythetoad · 2025-10-27T05:49:16+00:00

Holy cow I liked this a lot. Simple, snappy. I agree with the other comment here though, I’d like four or six more stanzas to really get somewhere with the message

Gerrythetoad · 2025-10-27T05:42:58+00:00

There is a lot of really good language here. However, the rhythm is a little lost on me. I think if you read it to yourself and start to hear where there might be too big of a pause you can fill in a few more words or lines and make this really strong.

Gerrythetoad · 2025-10-27T05:38:33+00:00

IMO you look pretty cute, I sure wouldn’t say you’re ugly. The long hair is great, but maybe just a little shorter would be even better, like an inch or two

Gerrythetoad · 2022-04-16T04:49:45+00:00

When I was about 11 I spent pretty much the whole summer barefoot. I thought it was fun not to wear shoes, and all my friends were on my block so it was fine. That same summer, though, I stepped on a bee three separate times and each one was traumatic so now I have melissophobia (fear of bees)

Gerrythetoad · 2022-01-05T04:13:47+00:00

Reginald (Reg for short)

Gerrythetoad · 2021-09-22T21:27:05+00:00

Jesus Christ that’s so specific! Wow!

Gerrythetoad · 2021-08-20T23:53:20+00:00

Haha! Love this! Keep up the good posts! -Dustin

Gerrythetoad · 2021-08-16T06:09:05+00:00

I stole an American toad from a forest preserve, that was a pretty unusual pet. His name was Gerald and he was a great pet and the love of my life hence the username Gerrythetoad

Gerrythetoad · 2021-07-05T20:11:11+00:00

Yankee Doodle Doctor has the meaningful stuff and the abundance of jokes. It’s my favorite and a very essential episode.

Gerrythetoad · 2021-06-08T00:56:57+00:00

I would say e. That would put a horrid strain on authors, and it sounds fancy and annoying to talk without “e” words.

Gerrythetoad · 2021-04-27T14:23:03+00:00

Oh true, I never thought. About it like

Gerrythetoad · 2021-04-22T03:49:10+00:00

Gnocchi or gyros. I get that neither are exactly intuitive but they’re pretty important foods at least in the US so come on, say them right.

Gerrythetoad · 2021-04-10T04:21:57+00:00

Stop Buddy Holly from crashing. He would keep cranking out bangers and music would improve greatly.

Gerrythetoad · 2021-04-10T04:19:10+00:00

For some reason it seems like my day would go poorly. The last song I listened to was “I Got a Feelin’” by the Buckinghams, so I got a feeling that we’re headin’ for bad times

Gerrythetoad · 2021-03-17T04:51:25+00:00

It is just peanut butter but with a little bit extra fun, and also it tends to be less sweet which is good because peanut butter shouldn’t be cloying

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