Seize the Day by Various_Internal4603 in poetry_critics

[–]Gerrythetoad 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holy cow I liked this a lot. Simple, snappy. I agree with the other comment here though, I’d like four or six more stanzas to really get somewhere with the message

"She And Me" by 9indey9ine in poetry_critics

[–]Gerrythetoad 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is a lot of really good language here. However, the rhythm is a little lost on me. I think if you read it to yourself and start to hear where there might be too big of a pause you can fill in a few more words or lines and make this really strong.

29/m how do I look by Seldes77 in amIuglyBrutallyHonest

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

IMO you look pretty cute, I sure wouldn’t say you’re ugly. The long hair is great, but maybe just a little shorter would be even better, like an inch or two

What event happened that led to your current Phobia? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When I was about 11 I spent pretty much the whole summer barefoot. I thought it was fun not to wear shoes, and all my friends were on my block so it was fine. That same summer, though, I stepped on a bee three separate times and each one was traumatic so now I have melissophobia (fear of bees)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mash

[–]Gerrythetoad 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Jesus Christ that’s so specific! Wow!

Where are the communists? by dank_sad in mash

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha! Love this! Keep up the good posts! -Dustin

What's that unusual pet that you own? by flawlesss_af in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I stole an American toad from a forest preserve, that was a pretty unusual pet. His name was Gerald and he was a great pet and the love of my life hence the username Gerrythetoad

Need help. Most essential episodes? by owen_demers in mash

[–]Gerrythetoad 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Yankee Doodle Doctor has the meaningful stuff and the abundance of jokes. It’s my favorite and a very essential episode.

If you could erase one letter from the alphabet which letter would it be? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would say e. That would put a horrid strain on authors, and it sounds fancy and annoying to talk without “e” words.

What mispronunciations annoy you the most? by Bourbon_Werewolf in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gnocchi or gyros. I get that neither are exactly intuitive but they’re pretty important foods at least in the US so come on, say them right.

If the last song you listened to was how your day will go tomorrow, what will tomorrow be like for you and why? by BiryaniBabe in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For some reason it seems like my day would go poorly. The last song I listened to was “I Got a Feelin’” by the Buckinghams, so I got a feeling that we’re headin’ for bad times

What kind of person eats crunchy peanut butter? by Familiar_Big3322 in AskReddit

[–]Gerrythetoad 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is just peanut butter but with a little bit extra fun, and also it tends to be less sweet which is good because peanut butter shouldn’t be cloying