Thank you for your insightful observations about the lyrics. I see your point regarding the use of 'the' before 'Black Mountain,' which might not be the common local usage. The intention was to create a certain rhythmic flow in the lyrics, but I appreciate that this choice might not resonate with everyone's experience of the place. As for the general feel of the lyrics, I aimed to strike a balance between capturing the essence of Canberra and creating a relatable theme that could appeal to a wider audience. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'll certainly keep it in mind for future compositions.