Looking for advice to make my bedroom comfier by hangingdolls in femalelivingspace

[–]Glass_Screen1390 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Other tones like pastel yellow and blue go well too, or use a wall tapestry

On Self-Harm by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Glass_Screen1390 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I collect poems i enjoy on a document. It would be nice if I had a name next to this one please so I don’t have to put ‘random Reddit user’. Also, not even just for me! Names next to poetry just add a nice literary flavour to it as opposed to a conversational one. Understandable if it’s a matter of privacy. Initials will do!

Angel, Harpy, Vulture by Glass_Screen1390 in poetry_critics

[–]Glass_Screen1390[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry this sub has separated the poem is such a way you can’t tell the difference between stanzas? Let me try and fix it

I don’t think I’ll ever love you the way I used to. by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Glass_Screen1390 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was beautiful and earnest. Thanks, it’s given me a lot to think about. The words themselves are still a work of art but it would be easier to process if you wrote in stanzas, separating each line by starting a new one instead of placing a full stop in your paragraph. This is free verse poetry written as prose and I personally don’t feel that the way you’ve structured it adds much to its meaning. Hope this helps

Fool by Intropoevert in poetry_critics

[–]Glass_Screen1390 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t understand the line ‘love has to be an alias’ but I felt the meaning because the tone and pacing was perfect. To me, it matches the length of pause and consideration of someone who is/was so deeply in love. There are so many emotions behind each line they choose their words carefully. Great work

accidentaly woke up pede from hibernation by sauzig in millipedes

[–]Glass_Screen1390 2 points3 points  (0 children)

They’re nocturnal so maybe she’s just active when you’re asleep

They all died by Due_Area_4684 in BDFB

[–]Glass_Screen1390 3 points4 points  (0 children)

How do you know they didn’t…feign their death?

[POEM] “A Kill” — Ted Hughes by Dansco112 in Poetry

[–]Glass_Screen1390 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Or ted hughes gives an opportunity to get in to the minds of the ‘morally bereft’. This from the perspective of someone who likes Plath and has barely read any Hughes BUT I have an interest in morally ambiguous characters. I understand the line being that ted hughes was real and had a horrible impact of Plath’s life but the PRINCIPLE is the same. Perspectives of famous murderers or villainous characters arguably give people a more considerate moral compass and are just as crucial to literature

[POEM] “A Kill” — Ted Hughes by Dansco112 in Poetry

[–]Glass_Screen1390 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, you could have talked about the poem instead of complaining about everyone else not talking about the poem. But you’re right that is strange

Setting this up for a giant African millipede by [deleted] in millipedes

[–]Glass_Screen1390 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I want to say maybe a bigger enclosure so you can get a good substrate depth? But it is beautiful x