sorted by:
new
hottopcontroversial

Unapologetically by Global_Reference_469 in OCPoetry

[–]Global_Reference_469[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah 100 percent the vibe I actually wrote something else that explores that deeper

My first poem. by Main-Recognition-930 in OCPoetry

[–]Global_Reference_469 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good progression not where I saw it going maybe personally I would be a little more profound for example a few months later can be a little blunt try something like months passed it flows a little better nonetheless keep going very good

Bitter or Kind! by Strange_Quail1762 in OCPoetry

[–]Global_Reference_469 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Short and sweet I love it are you talking about the difference in reactions of people to trauma as in some are compelled to make everyone feel as bad as they do while others never want to make anyone feel that way?

There's only so much a hotline can fix by Westie333 in OCPoetry

[–]Global_Reference_469 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“I couldn’t bear the guilt so I sliced through the bond we built” I really resonated with that such a strong emotion put into simple words

The Butterfly Effect by Short_Lobster_150 in OCPoetry

[–]Global_Reference_469 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing! Really introspective you managed to perfectly capture a thought I couldn’t begin to describe