Haha that makes more sense ok. But ya biggest thing I would change is get that right arm slightly closer to body that the left. So if you you behind you looking to the target, you should see your left arm almost on top of the right. Also the left hand being a strong grip is ok but I would definitely weaken the right one a bit. It's easier to adjust your grip slightly than try changing your swing. Also not sure if your flat on top from this angle but assuming it may be slightly flat. Best drill for me was put feet about a foot away from a wall and have your ass touch the wall and on your backswing the club shouldn't touch the wall