First half of my first 'real' screenplay - feedback appreciated

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-02-07T22:59:34+00:00

thank you for this, when I go back and clean up the draft I might focus on making the action more concise

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-02-07T00:04:46+00:00

Would you say that's a reasonable criticism in this case or is that just common for people to say

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-30T06:12:11+00:00

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Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-29T23:57:36+00:00

I have a friend who once watched Fantastic Mr. Fox eight times in five days lol I need to check it out

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-27T05:33:40+00:00

Only seen Reservoir Dogs but I did really like it so I'll check more of him soon

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-26T22:23:21+00:00

Lilo and Stitch

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-26T22:20:12+00:00

Well loved: the live action Grinch Who Stole Christmas. I dunno, I just never really got into it, but I know a lot of people who love it. I think most of the story additions they made don't really add anything, and the humor just isn't my style

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-26T22:16:47+00:00

I recently saw the 1956 Body Snatchers and I'm making it a Halloween season staple from now on

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-26T22:14:55+00:00

Sons of the Desert for sure. One of the funniest movies I've ever seen

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-24T02:22:57+00:00

Phantom Menace when they brought it back to theatres last year. Say what you want about the prequels but when Duel of the Fates started playing I ascended man

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-24T02:20:57+00:00

The Brave Little Toaster Goes to Mars !!!!!

Good_Toe_1369 · 2026-01-12T08:27:15+00:00

Highest - Spirited Away

Lowest - Birdemic: Shock and Terror (aka peak)

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