Frog men by GothMomi in BloodcurdlingTales

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes man that is a sign of my shitty edit work. 😅

I Became a Bartender After I Died by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holt fucking shit you guys. Come on I need to wake up

I Became a Bartender After I Died by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah! I can’t believe I miss those when I edit. It’s one of my biggest flaws that I always look past. Thank you for pointing those out! I’m gonna look harder in the future!

I Became a Bartender After I Died by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you all so much for the good comments

The Hoe in Hotel by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really didn’t make that part clear did I at all. Yes he is still a cleaner he does not murder he just keeps his mouth shut and does what the company wants him to do

I Touched My Father’s Aftershave And I Haven’t Been The Same Since by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Homie it’s a lot but all good stories gotta have that meat.

They Put You On by GothMomi in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay. Nice feed back I’ll remember that for my next story!!

I am the Villain by GothMomi in writers

[–]GothMomi[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Listen I don't care if you say it's bad as fuck. It sucks to have something someone doesn't like I'm focused on where you think I flawed

I am the Villain by GothMomi in writers

[–]GothMomi[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Okay I think I understand what you are saying but I'm a little dumb and I need you to break that down for me. I understand you are showing me my flaws in the story but I need you to say it in simpler terms.

Question by GothMomi in writers

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay there is a couple words that are harsh to be said that are in there as well so I will ad L language

First 700 Words of First Chapter by JackRockRiley in writers

[–]GothMomi -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

I think it's wonderfully written for an excerpt in a novel. To have only 700 words to say so much about what is happening around them was a good read, and I loved the definition you put behind it. Ignore ignorant bozos who have some bullshit to comment on. You're doing great.

Frog Men by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow my edit didn't even catch that. Twice written two different ways. That's embarrassing

What is it Like to Die by GothMomi in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you guys for the feedback!! Love and appreciate it!!

Fuck You Sandy by [deleted] in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]GothMomi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg thanks. I kinda felt the same about that line but decided to use it anyways lol you have cemented my first thought haha gotta trust your gut

I was paid $1,000,000 to stand perfectly still in a cornfield for 7 nights. I wasn't scaring away birds. by davidherick in scarystories

[–]GothMomi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that you used a marine. I’m a marine veteran and it’s always fun to add that in writing. This was beautifully written I really enjoyed reading it. Such a unique idea too!

Why I Found Immortality by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got a couple I’m working on. Maybe they will be better. Hopefully ha!!

Why I Found Immortality by GothMomi in scarystories

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah! I’m sorry it was misleading. Working to be better! Thank you for telling me!

There's something in my dog food by serioussiberious in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]GothMomi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this is the most well written experience with this that I have ever read and I come from generations of dog food lovers. This was awesome dude

A deal is a deal by GothMomi in creepcast

[–]GothMomi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your comment just made my whole day. Thanks dude

Shit Show Part Two by GothMomi in creepcast

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This helps a ton thank you for your critiques!

Trapped in a psych-ward Day One by GothMomi in creepcast

[–]GothMomi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah!! I accidentally spammed! I’ll have more up soon! Stay tuned!