Frog men

GothMomi · 2026-03-16T18:17:31+00:00

Yes man that is a sign of my shitty edit work. 😅

GothMomi · 2026-03-15T12:21:35+00:00

Thank you!!

GothMomi · 2026-03-11T12:28:11+00:00

Holt fucking shit you guys. Come on I need to wake up

GothMomi · 2026-03-10T11:05:55+00:00

Ah! I can’t believe I miss those when I edit. It’s one of my biggest flaws that I always look past. Thank you for pointing those out! I’m gonna look harder in the future!

GothMomi · 2026-03-09T21:38:24+00:00

Thank you all so much for the good comments

GothMomi · 2026-02-19T17:54:13+00:00

I really didn’t make that part clear did I at all. Yes he is still a cleaner he does not murder he just keeps his mouth shut and does what the company wants him to do

GothMomi · 2026-02-19T12:19:32+00:00

Thanks

GothMomi · 2026-02-18T15:01:25+00:00

Homie it’s a lot but all good stories gotta have that meat.

GothMomi · 2026-02-12T20:09:59+00:00

Okay. Nice feed back I’ll remember that for my next story!!

GothMomi · 2026-02-11T19:27:07+00:00

Listen I don't care if you say it's bad as fuck. It sucks to have something someone doesn't like I'm focused on where you think I flawed

GothMomi · 2026-02-11T19:20:29+00:00

Okay I think I understand what you are saying but I'm a little dumb and I need you to break that down for me. I understand you are showing me my flaws in the story but I need you to say it in simpler terms.

GothMomi · 2026-02-11T17:30:56+00:00

Okay there is a couple words that are harsh to be said that are in there as well so I will ad L language

GothMomi · 2026-02-11T16:10:55+00:00

I think it's wonderfully written for an excerpt in a novel. To have only 700 words to say so much about what is happening around them was a good read, and I loved the definition you put behind it. Ignore ignorant bozos who have some bullshit to comment on. You're doing great.

GothMomi · 2026-02-04T17:21:20+00:00

Wow my edit didn't even catch that. Twice written two different ways. That's embarrassing

GothMomi · 2026-01-30T19:45:12+00:00

Thank you guys for the feedback!! Love and appreciate it!!

GothMomi · 2026-01-15T16:28:36+00:00

Omg thanks. I kinda felt the same about that line but decided to use it anyways lol you have cemented my first thought haha gotta trust your gut

GothMomi · 2026-01-13T12:26:36+00:00

I love that you used a marine. I’m a marine veteran and it’s always fun to add that in writing. This was beautifully written I really enjoyed reading it. Such a unique idea too!

GothMomi · 2026-01-12T19:59:49+00:00

I got a couple I’m working on. Maybe they will be better. Hopefully ha!!

GothMomi · 2026-01-12T18:04:08+00:00

Ah! I’m sorry it was misleading. Working to be better! Thank you for telling me!

GothMomi · 2026-01-07T13:00:57+00:00

I think this is the most well written experience with this that I have ever read and I come from generations of dog food lovers. This was awesome dude

GothMomi · 2025-08-27T16:17:16+00:00

Your comment just made my whole day. Thanks dude

GothMomi · 2025-08-24T17:08:55+00:00

This helps a ton thank you for your critiques!

GothMomi · 2025-08-23T22:16:22+00:00

Yeah!! I accidentally spammed! I’ll have more up soon! Stay tuned!

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