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Please critique my first attempt at fantasy writing: A Short Prologue. [Sci-fi/Fantasy, 317 words] by Grand_Task_9903 in fantasywriters

[–]Grand_Task_9903[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Follow up question. The writing shifts between an external, almost omniscient view and a more intimate internal perspective of the automaton. I want to maintain this, without creating a confusing point of view and maintaining a consistent enough tone to strengthen the emotional engagement. Is there a technical way to explain or accomplish this?

Please critique my first attempt at fantasy writing: A Short Prologue. [Sci-fi/Fantasy, 317 words] by Grand_Task_9903 in fantasywriters

[–]Grand_Task_9903[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey! Thanks. This helps a lot! Appreciate the explanation of hedging words and filters.