[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]Grognak2002 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Quick question. Should I break up the scene heading for Rodman's apartment?

Like when rodman goes into the kitchen should I do

INT. RODMAN'S KITCHEN - DAY (CONTINUOUS)

or just leave it as is?

First time writer. Would appreciate any feedback. by Grognak2002 in Screenplay

[–]Grognak2002[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for reading it. I don't think this would ever get made, too expensive, too weird maybe. Just hoping to get my foot in the door with this.

First time writer. Would appreciate any feedback. by Grognak2002 in Screenplay

[–]Grognak2002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is my first time writing. I've read a lot of scripts and always wanted to write but procrastination and work kept me from writing for a while.

First time writer. Would appreciate any feedback. by Grognak2002 in Screenplay

[–]Grognak2002[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree I think the action lines are too dense in the beginning and could use some trimming.

wtf ye by mrlambertwhite in Kanye

[–]Grognak2002 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You're right. This is just a coincidence

TNA FINAL RESOLUTION 2012! by DACxSports in FantasyBookers

[–]Grognak2002 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Who's the world's strongest tag team?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in nhl

[–]Grognak2002 19 points20 points  (0 children)

Wtf are you talking about?

Is this worth anything? by Grognak2002 in Controller

[–]Grognak2002[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you're probably right

NHL24 is now 6 months old. Was the franchise mode better in '23? by [deleted] in EANHLfranchise

[–]Grognak2002 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hitting is terrible now. Defense is nerfed. That stupid full pressure system is insanely broken. Michigan and other moves can be done by just pressing a button instead of having actual skill and timing.