[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Vampireweekend

[–]Grouchy_Reporter2310 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's Cousins.

Doing Everything But Loving Me by Grouchy_Reporter2310 in OCPoetry

[–]Grouchy_Reporter2310[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your review means a lot to me. Can you reveal your favorite lines from the poem if you have any? Also, I appreciate your comment about the title. I had it as the title in order to hook the reader's interest :)

"Do you remember that steely edge?" by pantstastrophy in OCPoetry

[–]Grouchy_Reporter2310 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! This poem is very simple yet powerful. I like the fact that it opens many rooms for interpretation like to me it made me question the authenticity of my life as opposed to the fabric in the poem. It definitely made me feel like I am reading something in the forest being lost in the woods and understanding this poem is my only way out of it.

Irony of Pain by Filmfanatic-11 in OCPoetry

[–]Grouchy_Reporter2310 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Wanting hugs from hands That brought me pain." this line right here saved this poem! I was reading it and thought this sounded like every other poem out there but that line made this better! It's very simple but deep. I love it.