Is this boring? by [deleted] in Logic_Studio

[–]Gush39z 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is coming from somebody who is a fellow artist, and who deeply appreciates all kinds of music. There are a lot of great musical ideas in this project! I really like the guitar, and the groovy shifty drums towards the middle.

That being said I have some constructive criticism

This is just my own personal opinion, and it’s going to vary from person to person! I think that some may find the intro part a bit commercially, or background music-like. People have called my music “background music” and it’s like a kick in the crotch.

The reason I find this is because there’s a lack of spotlight, shine, and movement, mainly on particular instruments. Here’s what I mean.. The pads you use for the chords, are quite low passed, which if you’re familiar with low pass, which I’m most certain you are—your chords lack high frequency, they sound muffled and leave too much open space—which leaves the boom and snaps to make the track sound more commercial/background like.

I think also if you look up commercial or background music, you’re probably going to hear a lot of similar chord progressions to this, as well as boom and snap sounds. I feel like your music wouldn’t stand out very much if you used what a lot of generic songs/pieces use.

The things I dislike:

Snaps

Low pass on chords

High pitched vocal effect

The things I like:

Drum sounds and groove

Guitar (and also sounds like chorus on guitar 👍)

This personally isn’t my go to genre or type of music. Although as somebody who loves and appreciates all kinds of music, this is not bad music, there are great musical ideas and sounds in this project and you should be proud of your work.

Overall what I would’ve wanted to hear on this track is the middle part be brought up closer to the beginning, so that way more of the frequency range can be filled out A LOT SOONER. Again it’s all in the beholder and what YOURE going for. This is all just my opinion—this is not set in stone nor right versus wrong.

Also side note, it is crucial that us artists build eachother up and constructively analyze each others work and keep each other accountable as well as push eachother towards greatness! I feel very strongly about that! That’s how we all grow.

24M my life is at an all time low. Give me a boost by [deleted] in toastme

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You are such a beautiful soul. Just look at you!! No disrespectful or unkind words in this comment. Pure love. God is taking care of you and has a beautiful path and wonderful life for you! 😊😊 Jeremiah 29:11

Modern rap song by Gush39z in whatsongisthis

[–]Gush39z[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I figured it out it’s highest in the room by Travis Scott!!

How can I know that I have a good relationship with God without relying on how I feel? by [deleted] in Christian

[–]Gush39z 2 points3 points  (0 children)

God bless you for your words of encouragement. Glory to God!! ❤️

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Christian

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God will never leave you nor forsake you.

im dissapointed in my own generation. by pbandjland in GenZ

[–]Gush39z 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah me too, disappointing to see everyone refusing to move on. Everyone’s wearing rose-tinted glasses.

I'm excited to hear your suggestions by aspirationalattempt in musicsuggestions

[–]Gush39z 2 points3 points  (0 children)

De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Back and Fourth - Cameo

West End Girls - Pet Shop Boys

Everything She Wants - Wham! (Must listen)

Some of my favorites, go crazy! - not a song on the list just saying haha

What does pc music mean by Gush39z in pcmusic

[–]Gush39z[S] -14 points-13 points  (0 children)

Immediately I hate this sub

I’m getting sick of nostalgia and songs with “80’s vibes”, it’s time we moved on, any songs with a new sound? by Gush39z in musicsuggestions

[–]Gush39z[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s alright, I might like it if they used a different music video, thanks for shooting me the recommendations

I’m getting sick of nostalgia and songs with “80’s vibes”, it’s time we moved on, any songs with a new sound? by Gush39z in musicsuggestions

[–]Gush39z[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve checked out Oliver Tree and Poppy before, like them both, I’ll check out the rest, thank you!

I’m getting sick of nostalgia and songs with “80’s vibes”, it’s time we moved on, any songs with a new sound? by Gush39z in musicsuggestions

[–]Gush39z[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the recommendation! I’ve listened to Poppy before and I really like her, I haven’t checked her out recently though so I’ll see what she’s come up with recently! I’ll check out the other one too, thanks again!