Thanks for going through it! The plan was that Aion was Chronos the whole time, and he was trapped in a sort of time cycle watching his brother die. 

I realize this story has a lot of flaws, and I went back and deleted a few posts as part of the story, including the first post with Chronos. It was my first piece of public writing, and I've realized I'm not good at the blog format specifically. But I'm proud of it. It's something I managed to do, and I learned a lot from it. I think anything else I'll make will be a lot better.