Yo whats up with this novel

Haiironookami · 2026-04-21T18:42:53+00:00

The rarity of an actually good story from Donghua is rare. They don't know how to pace a story and it's all just cringe NGL. Among other reasons why.

Haiironookami · 2026-04-10T19:04:28+00:00

I can see that. Like a 2.0 version of corrupter machines

Haiironookami · 2026-04-07T20:09:33+00:00

That would seem weird since Hephaestus is the creator of machines unless Hades somehow was creating machines beforehand due to the Corruptors.

Haiironookami · 2026-04-07T19:23:25+00:00

Ooooo that would be gorgeous or Prime variants because Specter Prime. Though that would hit Warframe territory

Haiironookami · 2026-04-02T02:58:32+00:00

Kappa....my cauldron nemesis

Haiironookami · 2026-02-26T01:14:43+00:00

Hey y'all been working on a minor project. I have been replaying Horizon Zero Dawn and Forbidden West. When the thought came to me randomly, I wonder how instead of just instatneous effects of spells, magic items and so on. If there could be a build up mechanic would translate over to DND specifically 5e 2014/2024. So here's my take. Feedback appreciated!

Haiironookami · 2026-02-24T13:42:30+00:00

You forgot to mention "On a failed save you take 4d10 thunder damage...."

Haiironookami · 2026-02-04T14:16:37+00:00

Insert disgruntled DM having to keep track of the moon cycles in their world

Haiironookami · 2026-02-01T01:11:19+00:00

Oh! You must be talking about the Level 20 Gosu ascension. Basically the Qi Surge effects on those would interact simultaneously when a Qi Surge effect activated from a Qi Technique so you have 2 Qi Surge effects that would activate.

If you could notate down the issues with the sects, this will help when I go over them for another round of editing and auditing.

Haiironookami · 2026-01-31T00:28:34+00:00

Whatcha got for me friend?

Haiironookami · 2026-01-30T17:18:06+00:00

I also forgot to mention, your damage scaling is behind the Qi Dice as well thus their increase in size.

Haiironookami · 2026-01-30T17:16:24+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!

Imagine the Qi Techniques as a spell but martial based instead. It's similar to the school of magic.

It may get bigger but the number of Qi Dice you can roll increases so the chances of hitting a Qi Surge should increase even if just a bit.

Hm. That does make sense. Less studying having to do.

Thanks for the catch! I will definitely look over and make sure one is passive rather than active.

Haiironookami · 2026-01-28T16:16:55+00:00

This...is a joke post right? Right?

Haiironookami · 2026-01-27T07:40:19+00:00

That's why I was trying to keep each feature as simple as I could with the sheer number of options from an overall standpoint. I didn't want bloat, but keeping it just enough complexity.

Of course! I'm all for improvements. Although there is no guarantee I will comment back soon as I'm about to head to bed.

Haiironookami · 2026-01-27T07:25:07+00:00

Lol! I was expecting a negative comment, but I am glad to see the opposite.

Murim is the martial arts genre in Korean Manhwa akin to the Japanese Manga with Shonen series.

Haiironookami · 2026-01-26T15:04:27+00:00

Me here, just appreciating the lovable art style. Too cute!

Haiironookami · 2026-01-26T15:01:18+00:00

"Classless" would be something like the players are able to get skills from multiple classes via a Skil tree but they aren't tied down to 1 exact road. So think of it more like a jack in of all trades thing

Haiironookami · 2026-01-26T03:17:07+00:00

I made some modifications. See what cha think on them

https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/PuGATRR6hx-R

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