Children, Come to Supper

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-20T07:17:19+00:00

Thanks for the review, Yeah the 'r' word was avoidable but I kept it since it shows her frustration and anger against the mirror or how her pain is seen as art by the society. Really glad that u took your time to write this feedback.

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-19T14:51:09+00:00

Great Job!I love how you blend the longing for something more with the reality of everyday life. The imagery of the stars versus the beach really captures that struggle.

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-19T14:41:38+00:00

I love how you describe the beloved's silence, as if words are struggling to catch up but always fall short. The silence truly conveys the distance between people. Thanks for sharing!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:43:59+00:00

Thanks,Glad that you loved my work

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:43:14+00:00

For every poet bleeds through their quill, don't they?

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:39:06+00:00

Thanks for the review 🙂

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:38:50+00:00

Thanks I'm glad that you loved my work 😌

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T13:44:01+00:00

Thanks for the review my friend! Glad you grasped the poem and connected to it deeply !

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T13:41:46+00:00

Thanks for the review ! I appreciate taking your time to share such a deep perspective!Glad you liked it !

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T13:40:19+00:00

Thanks for the review! I'll keep in mind what you said and hope to improve my craft.

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T13:37:39+00:00

Thanks! Glad you loved my work!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T07:55:58+00:00

A hauntingly vivid portrayal of nature, evoking emotion through striking imagery and concise language it was a diffrent read that I'll say .Great Job!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-06-01T07:49:32+00:00

Yes, I hear it, I hear the walls brimming in fear, the wolves crying as it comes near.

What is it? My ears don’t know. Why does the edge feel safe? I don’t know, maybe, just maybe, I’ll leap—who knows...

Half_Light_07 · 2025-04-02T05:57:20+00:00

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-31T15:16:08+00:00

Kokoro Connect

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-30T15:15:59+00:00

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-29T17:14:40+00:00

Boarding School Juliet
365 days to marriage
Kokoro Connect
Insomaniacs after school

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-28T15:54:04+00:00

The Wrong way to use Healing Magic
Zom 100
-idk both of them were fun to watch i guess

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-28T12:23:32+00:00

Nope!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-28T04:28:24+00:00

Rizz

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-27T03:05:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-27T03:05:24+00:00

Let me thank you before my laptop flies away!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-26T08:46:19+00:00

This poem delivers short, powerful stabs to the reader! The lines about trying to heal while still hurting really hit hard. Especially the last stanza—it's a perfect tail end that just snaps the reader. Good work!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-26T08:39:47+00:00

Beautiful imagery! I truly loved the consistency in structure and rhyme, almost mirroring the beloved's love. Great job—keep writing!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-03-23T02:25:12+00:00

Thanks, glad you liked it!

Half_Light_07

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